Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like shopping?
수험생
Yes, I'm definitely a shopaholic. I like buying different kinds of cute stuff because I think they are quite cheap. At the same time, they bring me happiness.
시험관
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
수험생
I don't really compare prices when I shop because I think I'm quite a impulsive shopper, so sometimes when I saw something I really like or I think it's really cute, then I will immediately buy it. But when I know that there is something definitely selling cheaper than here that I will.
시험관
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
수험생
Yes, you know, sometimes there are, umm, many different kinds of the same series, and I don't really have so much money to afford all of them. Then I have to choose one. But it's really hard for me to pick my favorite because every one of them is very cute.
시험관
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
수험생
I don't really think so because I think there are many factors leading to the price of a product. For example, umm, the design, for example, the quality, umm, as well as well as the marketing. So sometimes I think because of marketing something are really overpriced. So I don't really believe.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like shopping?
점수: 75.0제안: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'cute stuff' and 'quite cheap', you can combine ideas and add a linking phrase to improve coherence.
예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping a lot because I find cute items that are affordable, and they always make me happy.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. Also, watch verb tenses and sentence structure for clarity.
예시: I usually don't compare prices because I'm an impulsive shopper; if I see something cute, I buy it immediately. However, if I know a product is definitely cheaper elsewhere, I will consider buying it there.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
점수: 72.0제안: Try to reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'you know' to make your speech more fluent. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and make your answer more coherent.
예시: Yes, it is difficult because there are many options in the same series, and since I can't afford all of them, I have to choose one. However, it's hard to pick my favorite because they are all very cute.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
점수: 68.0제안: Avoid repeating phrases like 'for example' and filler words such as 'umm'. Use linking words to organize your ideas clearly and provide specific examples to support your opinion.
예시: I don't think expensive products are always better because price depends on factors like design, quality, and marketing. Sometimes, marketing causes products to be overpriced, so price doesn't always reflect quality.
문법
× sometimes when I saw something I really like or I think it's really cute, then I will immediately buy it.
✓ sometimes when I see something I really like or I think it's really cute, then I will immediately buy it.
The sentence mixes past tense 'saw' with present tense 'like' and 'think'. To keep tense consistency, 'saw' should be changed to present tense 'see' because the action is habitual or general.
× But when I know that there is something definitely selling cheaper than here that I will.
✓ But when I know that something is definitely selling cheaper than here, I will buy it.
The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb at the end. Adding 'buy it' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.
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