Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và làm câu trả lời ngắn gọn hơn để hiệu quả hơn. Bạn có thể thêm một câu ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý của mình.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it gives me a chance to find unique items and try new products, like when I recently discovered a handmade scarf at a local market.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời rất tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và ví dụ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'compare prices' nhiều lần.

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to save money. For instance, I use shopping apps to check different stores, so I can choose the best deal and avoid overpaying.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn (ví dụ: 'adversities' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn với từ nối phù hợp.

예시: Yes, it is often difficult for me to choose because there are many good options. For example, when buying snacks, I like several flavors, so I find it hard to decide which one to pick.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và giải thích rõ hơn ý kiến của mình.

예시: I believe expensive products are not always better. For example, products from well-known companies like Apple usually have good quality, but some cheaper brands can also be reliable.

× I often use shopping apps to check and compare prices from different store, which helps me make informed decisions and avoid overpaying.

✓ I often use shopping apps to check and compare prices from different stores, which helps me make informed decisions and avoid overpaying.

The word 'store' should be plural 'stores' because it refers to multiple places. Using the singular form here is incorrect when talking about more than one store.

× I usually have adversities and choosing the final product.

✓ I usually have difficulties choosing the final product.

The phrase 'have adversities and choosing' is incorrect. 'Adversities' is not commonly used in this context; 'difficulties' is more appropriate. Also, 'have difficulties choosing' is the correct structure, combining the verb 'have' with the gerund 'choosing'.

× There are a lot of flavor that I like, so it's kinda hard to make choices.

✓ There are a lot of flavors that I like, so it's kinda hard to make choices.

The noun 'flavor' should be plural 'flavors' because it refers to multiple types. Using singular form with 'a lot of' is incorrect.

× I think it depends on the company. This is because if the products are from great companies such as Apple or Samsung, so there's no debt in buying those products.

✓ I think it depends on the company. This is because if the products are from great companies such as Apple or Samsung, there is no doubt in buying those products.

The conjunction 'so' is incorrectly used after 'if' clause. The sentence should not have both 'if' and 'so' together. Also, 'debt' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'doubt'.

× However, if the products come from some small company, it's quite tough for me to choose.

✓ However, if the products come from some small companies, it's quite tough for me to choose.

The noun 'company' should be plural 'companies' because 'products' usually come from multiple companies. Using singular 'company' with plural 'products' is inconsistent.