Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more structured and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples. Avoid repetition and filler words like 'or or'.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially for clothes, electronics, and groceries. I usually shop two or three times a week because we often need ingredients to cook at home.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating words like 'same same time'.

예시: Yes, I always compare prices both in stores and online. This helps me find the best seller and the lowest price, which saves money and allows me to plan my purchases better.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to explain reasons clearly. Avoid grammatical errors and be specific.

예시: Yes, sometimes I find it difficult to choose, especially when there is a wide range of clothes with similar prices. It can also be challenging when electronic devices are available at different prices, making it hard to decide which one to buy.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has repetition. Try to express your opinion clearly and provide examples or reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and finish your sentences.

예시: In my experience, expensive products are often of better quality or branded. However, some cheaper items can be good if they are on sale or discounted, so price doesn't always guarantee quality.

× Yes, I like shopping mainly clothing or or any electronic device or even I enjoy shopping groceries where I usually go to shop twice or thrice in a week because we always need something to buy to cook.

✓ Yes, I like shopping mainly for clothing or any electronic device, or even groceries, where I usually go shopping twice or thrice a week because we always need something to buy to cook.

The original sentence lacks the preposition 'for' before 'clothing' and 'groceries' should not be preceded by 'shopping' without a preposition. Also, 'go to shop' is better expressed as 'go shopping'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I always compare prices before buying something from the shop or through online.

✓ Yes, I always compare prices before buying something from the shop or online.

The phrase 'through online' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted or 'online' is used as an adverb. Therefore, 'or online' is the proper form.

× Through online I compare prices and find out who is the best seller and who provides a cheaper price for the same item.

✓ Online, I compare prices and find out who is the best seller and who provides a cheaper price for the same item.

The phrase 'Through online' is incorrect; 'Online' alone is sufficient as an adverb. This correction improves the sentence's grammatical structure.

× So this will help us to save some money and the same same time we can plan to buy.

✓ So this will help us save some money and at the same time we can plan to buy.

The phrase 'and the same same time' is incorrect; it should be 'and at the same time'. Also, 'help us to save' is better as 'help us save' for natural English usage.

× Yeah, sometimes for some items I find it really difficult to buy or especially clothes.

✓ Yeah, sometimes for some items, especially clothes, I find it really difficult to buy them.

The original sentence is awkward and lacks clarity. Adding commas and the pronoun 'them' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× Then if there is a wide range of clothes and the prices are very competitive, we find it very difficulty.

✓ Then if there is a wide range of clothes and the prices are very competitive, we find it very difficult.

The word 'difficulty' is a noun, but the sentence requires the adjective 'difficult' to describe 'we find it'. This correction fixes the adjective/adverb misuse.

× And also same time if the electronic device is available for a lesser price and.

✓ Also, at the same time, if the electronic device is available for a lower price, then...

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. Adding 'at the same time' with commas and completing the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, based on my experience, I feel like if you're if you're paying more money for an item which means that is a branded or it is a good quality items.

✓ Yes, based on my experience, I feel that if you're paying more money for an item, it means that it is branded or of good quality.

The sentence has redundant 'if you're' and incorrect pronoun usage. 'That is a branded' is incorrect; it should be 'it is branded'. Also, 'items' should be singular 'item' to match the context.

× So however there are some items that put for a offer or a discount in order to not to.

✓ However, there are some items that are put on offer or discounted in order to...

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Put for a offer' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'put on offer'. The sentence needs completion for clarity.