Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“can allows me”应为“can allow me”，且句子结构稍显重复。建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确性。

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relax and forget about stress from school or work. When I visit malls, I often buy small items like hats, clothes, or books. Overall, shopping is a pleasant and calming activity for me.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“can allows me”应为“can allow me”，且表达不够简洁。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意语法准确。

예시: Yes, I usually compare prices because when I hesitate between similar items, I consider both quality and price carefully. Although it takes time, this helps me make better choices and buy the perfect product at an affordable price.

제안: 回答中表达不够自然，且“surprise”用词不当。建议使用更贴切的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices when shopping because I consider many factors such as value, quality, and usefulness. Therefore, it often takes me a long time to decide, but I always try to pick the best option.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“affordable item”应为“affordable items”，且表达略显简单。建议丰富词汇，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I don't think expensive products are always better because it depends on a person's financial situation. People with tight budgets usually prefer affordable items that offer good value. Therefore, we should make careful decisions about what to buy.

× Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it can allows me to take my mind off the stress from school or work.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it can allow me to take my mind off the stress from school or work.

情态动词can后面应接动词原形，不能加s。这里的allows应改为allow。

× Although it takes time, it can allows me to make a better choice or to buy the perfect one at an affordable price.

✓ Although it takes time, it can allow me to make a better choice or to buy the perfect one at an affordable price.

情态动词can后面应接动词原形，不能加s。这里的allows应改为allow。

× when I hesitate to similar items, I always consider both quality and price carefully.

✓ when I hesitate between similar items, I always consider both quality and price carefully.

动词hesitate后应接介词between表示在两者之间犹豫，不能用to。

× People with tight budgets prefer to buy affordable item that will have a good value.

✓ People with tight budgets prefer to buy affordable items that will have a good value.

item是可数名词，前面有形容词affordable修饰，需用复数形式items。