Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, but you could improve coherence by using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy shopping in my free time because it allows me to check out the latest trends. Moreover, I often go with friends, which makes it a social activity and a great way to spend quality time together.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your reasons and be careful with singular/plural forms. Also, clarify your last point about 'send money' for better understanding.

예시: Yes, I always compare prices on apps and websites because prices can vary. Additionally, my parents taught me to do this to save money, which is important since I have a limited budget.

제안: Your answer repeats ideas from the previous question and lacks clarity. Try to answer directly whether making choices is difficult and explain why, using linking words and specific details. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

예시: Yes, it can be difficult to make choices when shopping because I want to find the best value. Although I compare prices as my parents taught me, I sometimes struggle to decide between quality and cost.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant with good vocabulary. To improve, you could add a linking word to connect your ideas more smoothly and provide a specific example to support your opinion.

예시: To be honest, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because sometimes the price reflects the brand rather than quality. For example, some affordable brands offer durable products that perform just as well.

× Why yes, I always compare price for example on apps and website because sometimes the price are different.

✓ Why yes, I always compare prices, for example on apps and websites, because sometimes the prices are different.

The word 'price' should be plural 'prices' because it refers to multiple items or instances. Similarly, 'website' should be plural 'websites' to match 'apps' and indicate multiple platforms. Also, 'price are' is incorrect; it should be 'prices are' to agree in number.

× Yes, I always compare price, for example on apps and websites because the price is different.

✓ Yes, I always compare prices, for example on apps and websites, because the prices are different.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because it refers to multiple items or instances. Also, 'price is' should be 'prices are' to agree in number with the plural subject.