Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확해야 합니다. 'it's it saves time and it' 부분은 문법적으로 부자연스럽고 중복이 있으니 간결하게 표현하세요. 또한, 구체적인 이유나 경험을 추가하면 좋습니다.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially online using platforms like Neighbor or coupon sites because it saves me a lot of time and effort.

제안: 답변이 질문에 잘 맞지만, 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'how much it cost' 대신 'how much it costs'로 수정하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

예시: Yes, I usually compare prices because I have a limited budget. For example, when I visit offline shops, I check the online prices first to avoid paying more than necessary.

제안: 답변에 불필요한 부분('Adam')이 포함되어 있고, 문장 구조가 혼란스럽습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확하고 간결하게 설명하세요.

예시: I don't usually find it difficult to make choices because I have favorite brands, which makes deciding easier. However, sometimes I hesitate when there are many options.

제안: 답변이 주제를 잘 다루고 있으나, 문법 오류('Channels' 대신 'Chanel')와 반복적인 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 더 자연스럽고 정확하게 다듬으세요.

예시: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. For example, brands like Chanel and Louis Vuitton are costly mainly because of their brand reputation, not necessarily the quality.

× I like to shop online because it's it saves time and it.

✓ I like to shop online because it saves time.

The sentence contains redundant words 'it's it' which is incorrect. The correct form is 'it saves time'. Remove the extra 'it's it' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I usually search how much it cost online so that I don't have to pay for a more price than what it actually.

✓ I usually check how much it costs online so that I don't have to pay a higher price than it actually is.

The phrase 'search how much it cost online' is incorrect; 'check how much it costs online' is more appropriate. Also, 'pay for a more price' is incorrect; it should be 'pay a higher price'. The verb 'cost' should be in third person singular 'costs' to agree with 'it'.

× I usually search how much it cost online so that I don't have to pay for a more price than what it actually.

✓ I usually check how much it costs online so that I don't have to pay a higher price than it actually is.

The verb 'cost' should be in third person singular form 'costs' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Adam, you don't have difficulty when it comes to buying products.

✓ I don't have difficulty when it comes to buying products.

The student mistakenly uses 'you' instead of 'I' when referring to themselves. The correct pronoun is 'I' to match the subject of the sentence.

× The reason why I do not have difficulty is that I usually have my favorite brand and that makes me easily choose what I want to buy.

✓ The reason why I do not have difficulty is that I usually have my favorite brand, which makes it easy for me to choose what I want to buy.

The conjunction 'and' is incorrectly used to connect two clauses where a relative pronoun 'which' is more appropriate. Also, 'makes me easily choose' is awkward; 'makes it easy for me to choose' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× For instance, luxurious brand product such as Channels and Louis Vuitton.

✓ For instance, luxury brand products such as Chanel and Louis Vuitton.

The adjective 'luxurious' is incorrectly used; 'luxury' is the correct adjective to describe brands. Also, 'product' should be plural 'products' to match the plural brands. The brand name 'Channels' is incorrect; it should be 'Chanel'.

× Their products are expensive and costly because they are known for their luxurious brand.

✓ Their products are expensive because they are known for their luxury brand.

The phrase 'expensive and costly' is redundant; 'expensive' alone suffices. Also, 'luxurious brand' should be 'luxury brand' to correctly describe the brand type.

× It's not about quality, but it's about brand.

✓ It's not about quality, but about the brand.

The sentence is awkwardly structured. Removing the second 'it's' and adding 'the' before 'brand' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.