Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite natural and shows enthusiasm, but try to avoid informal terms like 'shopaholic' in IELTS speaking. Also, make your response more concise and directly answer the question first, then add supporting details with linking words.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping very much. In fact, I often visit street markets every weekend to find new items, as I like to update my belongings regularly.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to use more precise vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors like 'a reasonable prices' (should be singular or plural consistently).

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because it gives me an overview of available options and helps me purchase items at reasonable prices. Therefore, I usually use Google to check and compare prices before buying.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, 'to be very honest' is unnecessary here.

예시: Yes, I often find it difficult to make choices when shopping. Therefore, I usually bring my mother along because she gives me good advice and helps me select the best option.

제안: Your answer expresses your opinion clearly but could be improved by using more formal language and linking words to make it coherent. Avoid rhetorical questions and focus on giving specific reasons or examples.

예시: No, I do not think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. In my opinion, the quality of the product matters more than its price. For example, sometimes expensive branded items do not meet my expectations in terms of durability or performance.

× I love to buy new things every month, so on every weekend I go out to search in street markets.

✓ I love to buy new things every month, so every weekend I go out to search in street markets.

The phrase 'on every weekend' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted here. The phrase should be 'every weekend' without 'on' because 'every' already indicates frequency and does not require a preposition.

× ...helps me to buy particular thing at a reasonable prices.

✓ ...helps me to buy a particular thing at reasonable prices.

The phrase 'particular thing' needs an article 'a' before it because it is singular and countable. Also, 'prices' is plural, so 'a reasonable prices' is incorrect; it should be 'reasonable prices' without 'a'.

× So I usually compare prices on Google.

✓ So I usually compare prices using Google.

The preposition 'on' is not appropriate here. When referring to using a tool or platform, 'using' is more suitable than 'on' in this context.

× So to solve this I always bring my mother in this purpose because she always give me a correct advice and help me to choose the right option.

✓ So to solve this, I always bring my mother for this purpose because she always gives me correct advice and helps me choose the right option.

The phrase 'bring my mother in this purpose' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for this purpose'. Also, 'give' and 'help' need to be in third person singular form 'gives' and 'helps' to agree with 'she'. 'A correct advice' is incorrect because 'advice' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× ...she always give me a correct advice and help me to choose the right option.

✓ ...she always gives me correct advice and helps me choose the right option.

The verbs 'give' and 'help' must be in third person singular form 'gives' and 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. Also, 'a correct advice' is incorrect because 'advice' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.