Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and reduce redundancy such as repeating 'fresh'. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural. For example, instead of saying 'as possible as I can', you can say 'as much as I can'.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy grocery shopping because I can choose fresh produce and the best ingredients for my family. It gives me a sense of fulfillment to take care of their needs, even in small ways.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains some repetition ('different different') and could be more fluent. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, be careful with grammar, for example, 'a different different stores' should be 'different stores'.

예시: Yes, I usually compare prices because some shopkeepers might overcharge customers. Therefore, as a consumer, it is important to check prices at different stores before buying.

제안: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but try to avoid redundancy such as 'pre predetermined' (just 'predetermined' is enough). Also, linking your ideas with words like 'because' or 'so' can improve coherence.

예시: I don't find it difficult to make choices when shopping because I usually have a predetermined list of items. I rarely buy anything beyond that list, so shopping is straightforward for me.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors such as 'has' instead of 'have' and 'pre paying' instead of 'prepaying' or 'paying'. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to give specific examples.

예시: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, cheaper products can be of higher quality. However, if you pay a high price for something like facial cream, it usually contains rare ingredients that justify the cost.

× I don't think I find it difficult making choices whenever I go shopping.

✓ I don't think I find it difficult to make choices whenever I go shopping.

The verb 'find' is followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the gerund 'making'. Using 'to make' is grammatically correct in this context.

× I don't think expensive products has ever been better than the cheaper ones.

✓ I don't think expensive products have ever been better than the cheaper ones.

The subject 'products' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has' to agree in number.

× So as a consumer it is very important that I compare prices with a different different stores whenever I go shopping.

✓ So as a consumer it is very important that I compare prices with different stores whenever I go shopping.

The adjective 'different' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the duplicate improves clarity and correctness.