Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to discover new products and trends. I often go to shopping areas with my friends by train, which also makes it a social activity. I find it exciting to find good deals during our trips.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai nghĩa.

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to save money. I usually use comparison websites to check the best offers. My parents taught me to research carefully to avoid overspending.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Sometimes it is difficult to make choices because there are many attractive options. Therefore, I spend time comparing prices and reading reviews before deciding.

제안: Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để ý tưởng được truyền đạt hiệu quả.

예시: It depends on the product. For electronics, higher price usually means better technology. However, sometimes cheaper products offer similar quality, so it depends on your purpose and how you use them.

× I really enjoy it simple because it's a right way to discover new products and trades.

✓ I really enjoy it simply because it's the right way to discover new products and trades.

The adverb 'simply' should be used instead of the adjective 'simple' to modify the verb 'enjoy'. Also, 'a right way' should be 'the right way' because it refers to a specific method.

× I often go to shopping area with my friend by trains which makes social activity.

✓ I often go to the shopping area with my friend by train, which makes it a social activity.

The phrase 'go to shopping area' needs the definite article 'the'. 'By trains' should be 'by train' as 'train' is used in singular form when referring to transportation mode. Also, 'makes social activity' should be 'makes it a social activity' for clarity.

× I consider it exciting to find a good deals during our trip.

✓ I consider it exciting to find good deals during our trip.

The phrase 'a good deals' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'deals'. Removing 'a' corrects the plural usage.

× I really can't be priced when I serve because I want to share money.

✓ I really can't be priced when I shop because I want to save money.

The sentence is unclear and contains incorrect word choices. 'Serve' should be 'shop', and 'share money' should be 'save money'. Also, 'can't be priced' is incorrect; likely intended meaning is 'can't be overcharged' or 'can't be tricked on price' but simplified to 'can't be priced' is incorrect.

× I often use my compassion as a website to check the base offers the public come from my parents who taught me to research carefully to avoid buying too much.

✓ I often use comparison websites to check the best offers. This habit comes from my parents who taught me to research carefully to avoid buying too much.

The original sentence misuses 'compassion' instead of 'comparison', and the structure is confusing. 'My compassion as a website' is incorrect. Also, 'the base offers the public come from my parents' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects pronoun and noun usage.

× Suddenly the Pace Park operation for this is that there are many attractive options.

✓ The problem is that there are many attractive options.

The original sentence is incoherent and contains unrelated words. Simplifying to a clear sentence corrects the structure.

× I spend a lot of time comparing spray and reading review before making a decision.

✓ I spend a lot of time comparing prices and reading reviews before making a decision.

'Comparing spray' is incorrect; likely intended 'comparing prices'. 'Reading review' should be plural 'reading reviews'.

× As a research, I sometimes believe the stock is behind it because I can make.

✓ As a result, I sometimes believe the choice is difficult because I can make mistakes.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. 'As a research' should be 'As a result'. 'The stock is behind it' is unclear; likely intended 'the choice is difficult'. 'Because I can make' is incomplete; adding 'mistakes' completes the thought.

× For electronics a higher price of a mistake, better technology however, will it cost to hardly sometimes offer similar type and quality to considerable purpose and how you use it before deciding.

✓ For electronics, a higher price often means better technology; however, sometimes similar types and quality are offered at a lower cost. It depends on the purpose and how you use it before deciding.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. Correcting conjunctions and sentence structure clarifies the meaning. 'A higher price of a mistake' is incorrect; replaced with 'a higher price often means'. 'Will it cost to hardly sometimes offer' is nonsensical; corrected to 'sometimes similar types and quality are offered at a lower cost'.