Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并且使表达更流畅自然。可以适当增加细节，但不要过长。

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping very much. When I was a child, I used to go shopping with my mother every Sunday. Now, working in a supermarket helps me relieve stress, so shopping has become a hobby for me.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的句型和词汇，避免重复，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because everyone wants to buy things at a lower cost. Comparing prices helps me find the best deals, especially in supermarkets or markets.

제안: 回答不够明确且有语法错误，表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用清晰的句子，并且避免无关内容。

예시: No, I don't find it difficult to make choices when I shop because supermarkets offer many affordable products. This makes shopping easy and enjoyable for me.

제안: 回答表达不清，逻辑不够严密。建议明确表达观点，并用具体例子支持，同时注意语法和句子结构。

예시: I believe that expensive products are often better than cheaper ones because they usually have higher quality. For example, high-priced steaks tend to taste better and be fresher than cheaper options.

× I think compare prices in supermarket or market are such normal because people are wanted to buy some cheaper things.

✓ I think comparing prices in supermarkets or markets is normal because people want to buy cheaper things.

这里'supermarket'和'market'需要用复数形式，因为指的是一般的超市和市场。动词'are'应改为'is'，因为主语是单数的动名词短语'comparing prices'。另外，'people are wanted'是不正确的表达，应改为'people want'。

× I think compare prices in supermarket or market are such normal because people are wanted to buy some cheaper things.

✓ I think comparing prices in supermarkets or markets is normal because people want to buy cheaper things.

动词'compare'在这里作为主语，应使用动名词形式'comparing'。

× I don't have a chance to make choices when I was when I was shopping.

✓ I don't have a chance to make choices when I am shopping.

句子中时态不一致，前半句是现在时，后半句不应使用过去时，应改为现在时。

× when I'm working in a supermarket can release my stress immediately.

✓ when I'm working in a supermarket, I can release my stress immediately.

缺少主语'I'，且句子中缺少逗号分隔从句，导致句子结构不完整。

× people are wanted to buy some cheaper things.

✓ people want to buy cheaper things.

'people are wanted'是被动语态，语义不通，应改为主动语态'people want'。

× the supermarket prices are not higher and there's more affordable products in there.

✓ the supermarket prices are not high and there are more affordable products there.

'there's'是'there is'的缩写，后面接复数名词'products'应使用'there are'。另外，'higher'应改为'high'，因为比较对象未明确。

× the supermarket prices are not higher and there's more affordable products in there.

✓ the supermarket prices are not high and there are more affordable products there.

'higher'是比较级，句中未比较，应使用形容词原级'high'。

× people expect the buying expensive products such as the steaks or some high cost so that I think the expensive products will be better than the cheaper ones.

✓ people expect to buy expensive products such as steaks or some high-cost items, so I think expensive products are better than cheaper ones.

'the buying expensive products'结构不正确，应改为不定式'to buy expensive products'。'steaks'前不需要冠词'the'。'some high cost'应改为'some high-cost items'。