Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like shopping?
수험생
Of course it's most important act in my life because shopping is very good looking and when I when I when I doing shop, I really enjoying that and it's very gorgeous actually.
시험관
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
수험생
Absolutely, but not always. And sometimes I compare costs because I wanna buy. I wanna buy cheaper ones because it's very comfortable for me.
시험관
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
수험생
Absolutely. It's very difficult because when I choose between expensive clothes or cheaper clothes, most difficult because I wanna the main clothes for me.
시험관
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
수험생
Absolutely, because some clothes which made of leather is expensive products but cheaper too sometimes and expensive clothes are always better because he's good looking.
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총점
Part 1
Do you like shopping?
점수: 40.0제안: Ваш ответ не совсем естественный и содержит повторения. Постарайтесь использовать более простые и понятные выражения, избегая излишней сложности и повторов.
예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to find nice clothes and I find the experience quite enjoyable.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
점수: 50.0제안: Ответ немного разрозненный и содержит разговорные сокращения. Рекомендуется использовать связные предложения и более формальный стиль речи.
예시: Yes, I often compare prices because I want to find affordable options that suit my budget.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
점수: 45.0제안: Ответ не полностью ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует строить предложения более логично и использовать связующие слова.
예시: Yes, it can be difficult to choose between expensive and cheaper clothes because I want to pick the best ones for myself.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
점수: 40.0제안: Ответ нечеткий и содержит ошибки в грамматике и лексике. Рекомендуется давать более конкретные и логичные объяснения.
예시: I think expensive products are often better because they are made of higher quality materials, like leather, but sometimes cheaper products can also be good.
문법
× when I when I when I doing shop
✓ when I am shopping
The verb 'doing' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is the present continuous 'am shopping' to indicate an ongoing action.
× shopping is very good looking
✓ shopping is very enjoyable
'Good looking' is an adjective describing appearance, which is inappropriate here. 'Enjoyable' correctly describes the experience of shopping.
× I really enjoying that
✓ I really enjoy that
The verb 'enjoy' should be in the base form after 'really' to form the present simple tense.
× it's very gorgeous actually
✓ it's actually very enjoyable
'Gorgeous' describes appearance, not an experience. 'Enjoyable' fits the context better.
× I wanna buy cheaper ones because it's very comfortable for me
✓ I want to buy cheaper ones because they are more affordable for me
'It's' incorrectly refers to 'cheaper ones' which is plural; 'they are' is correct. Also, 'comfortable' is inappropriate; 'affordable' fits better.
× I wanna the main clothes for me
✓ I want the main clothes for myself
The verb 'wanna' requires an object; 'want the main clothes' is incomplete. Also, 'for me' should be 'for myself' to indicate reflexive action.
× he's good looking
✓ they look good
'He's' refers to a person, but the subject is 'expensive clothes' (plural). 'They look good' correctly refers to clothes.
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