Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, instead of 'make it a social even it's excited to find good idea,' you could say 'make it a social event, and it's exciting to find good ideas.'

예시: Yes, I like shopping because it's fun to discover new things and try them out. I also enjoy going with friends to make it a social event, and it's exciting to find good deals.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, say 'No, I don't compare prices because I usually shop at stores where I trust the prices are fair.' This is more natural and effective.

예시: No, I don't compare prices because I usually shop at stores where I trust the prices are fair and I am familiar with the brands.

제안: Your answer is mostly clear but contains some errors like 'make choose' instead of 'make choices.' Also, adding linking words can improve coherence. For example, 'No, it's not hard for me to make choices when shopping because I usually know what I want before I go, and I stick to a list. Besides, I trust certain brands, so I don't need to spend much time choosing.'

예시: No, it's not hard for me to make choices when shopping because I usually know what I want before I go, and I stick to a list. Besides, I trust certain brands, so I don't need to spend much time choosing.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but could be improved by correcting minor grammar errors and adding linking words for coherence. For example, 'I don't think expensive products are always better because sometimes you are just paying for the brand's name, and cheaper products can work just as well.'

예시: I don't think expensive products are always better because sometimes you are just paying for the brand's name, and cheaper products can work just as well.

× Yes, I like shopping because it's fun to find new thing and try.

✓ Yes, I like shopping because it's fun to find new things and try them.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'try' needs an object, so 'try them' is correct.

× I also enjoy going with friends and make it a social even it's excited to find good idea.

✓ I also enjoy going with friends and making it a social event; it's exciting to find good ideas.

The conjunction 'and' should connect parallel structures, so 'make' should be 'making'. 'Even' is a typo for 'event'. 'Excited' should be 'exciting' to describe the experience. 'Good idea' should be plural 'good ideas'.

× No, I don't compare price because I don't have a time that I prefer to shop at the same store where I know the price are fair and I trust the brand I buy.

✓ No, I don't compare prices because I don't have time; I prefer to shop at the same store where I know the prices are fair and I trust the brand I buy.

'Price' should be plural 'prices' when talking about multiple items. 'A time' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable here. 'Price are' should be 'prices are' to agree in number.

× No, it's not hard for me to make choose when shopping.

✓ No, it's not hard for me to make choices when shopping.

'Choose' is a verb; the noun form 'choice' or plural 'choices' is needed here. Since the context implies multiple options, 'choices' is appropriate.

× I trust garden brand so I don't need to spend much time choosing.

✓ I trust the Garden brand, so I don't need to spend much time choosing.

'Garden brand' is a proper noun and should be capitalized and preceded by the definite article 'the'.

× Sometime you are just paying for the brand's name and they are cheaper products that work just as well.

✓ Sometimes you are just paying for the brand's name, and there are cheaper products that work just as well.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'They are' is incorrect; 'there are' is needed to indicate existence of cheaper products.