Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は直接的で内容も理解できるが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I go to shopping once a week or a couple day to get food.」は「I go shopping once a week or every couple of days to buy food.」のように修正すると自然です。また、文をつなぐ接続詞を使い、より流暢に話す練習をしましょう。

예시: I don't particularly enjoy shopping for fun. However, I usually go shopping once a week or every couple of days to buy essential items like groceries and clothes.

제안: 回答は意図が伝わるものの、文法ミスや言葉の繰り返しが多く、流暢さに欠けます。例えば、「I usually prefer to go to couple of retail shops and compare it」は「I usually prefer to visit a couple of retail shops and compare prices」と言い換えられます。接続詞を使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I usually visit a couple of retail shops and compare prices because I want to save money. I believe it's wise to do so since it helps me get better deals.

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりにくく、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。「trace between the office and when I shop」は不自然で、「decide what to buy when I shop」のように言い換えましょう。また、同じ単語の繰り返しを避け、文を簡潔にまとめる練習が必要です。

예시: No, I don't find it difficult to decide what to buy because I only shop for things I really need. I usually have a clear idea in my mind and stick to it without wandering around.

제안: 回答は途中で終わっており、意味が不明瞭です。文法の誤りも多く、「expansion products」は「expensive products」の誤りと思われます。意見をはっきり述べ、理由や具体例を加えて話す練習をしましょう。

예시: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. For example, for everyday items, cheaper products can be just as useful and practical.

× I go to shopping once a week or a couple day to get food.

✓ I go shopping once a week or a couple of days to get food.

The phrase 'a couple day' is incorrect because 'couple' requires a plural noun following it. The correct form is 'a couple of days'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' is followed directly by the activity 'shopping' without 'to'. Therefore, 'go shopping' is correct.

× I usually prefer to go to couple of retail shops and compare it because I want to save some extra money and it I believe it is very wise to do so, that is, we can save extra.

✓ I usually prefer to go to a couple of retail shops and compare them because I want to save some extra money and I believe it is very wise to do so; that is, we can save extra.

The phrase 'go to couple of retail shops' is missing the article 'a' before 'couple'. Also, 'compare it' is incorrect because 'it' refers to a singular object, but 'shops' is plural, so 'compare them' is correct.

× I do not find it difficult to trace between the office and when I shop because I only shop the things that are fairly necessary necessary to me.

✓ I do not find it difficult to choose between the office and when I shop because I only shop for things that are fairly necessary to me.

The word 'trace' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'choose'. Also, 'shop the things' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'shop for things'. The repeated word 'necessary necessary' is a typo and should be corrected to a single 'necessary'.

× I have a clear cut my picture of what I need in my mind and I just go through it.

✓ I have a clear picture of what I need in my mind and I just go through it.

The phrase 'a clear cut my picture' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a clear picture'. 'Clear-cut' is an adjective but is not used correctly here.

× I believe there is misconception that our expansion products are always better than the cheaper ones because if we need something subtle and very necessity in our daily life, we can go for something cheaper and.

✓ I believe there is a misconception that expensive products are always better than the cheaper ones because if we need something subtle and very necessary in our daily life, we can go for something cheaper.

The phrase 'there is misconception' is missing the article 'a' before 'misconception'. 'Our expansion products' is incorrect; it should be 'expensive products'. 'Very necessity' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'very necessary'. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected accordingly.