Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I very like shopping'. Bạn nên sử dụng các cụm từ tự nhiên hơn và mở rộng câu trả lời để làm cho câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it helps me feel happy and relaxed after a tiring day.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến việc sử dụng số nhiều và chia động từ đúng, ví dụ 'prices' thay vì 'price' và 'I am shopping' hoặc 'I shop'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

예시: I always compare prices when I shop because it helps me save money and find good deals.

제안: Bạn cần sử dụng thì hiện tại đúng, ví dụ 'I am always worried' hoặc 'I always worry'. Câu trả lời nên được mở rộng thêm để giải thích lý do hoặc đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: Of course, I always worry about making the wrong choice because sometimes products look similar but have different quality.

제안: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'Not always' thay vì 'Not away'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc đầy đủ và sử dụng so sánh đúng ngữ pháp.

예시: Not always. Sometimes cheaper products can be better than expensive ones, especially if they have good reviews or come from reliable brands.

× Yes, I very like shopping which can help me happy and comfortable after a tiring day.

✓ Yes, I like shopping very much because it helps me feel happy and comfortable after a tiring day.

The adverb 'very' is incorrectly placed before the verb 'like'. In English, 'very' modifies adjectives or other adverbs, not verbs. The correct phrase is 'like very much'. Also, 'which can help me happy and comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'because it helps me feel happy and comfortable' to express cause and effect properly.

× I always compare price when I shopping because this will save my money and have a good deal.

✓ I always compare prices when I shop because this will save me money and help me get a good deal.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because multiple prices are compared. The verb 'shopping' is incorrectly used; it should be 'shop' to match the subject 'I'. Also, 'have a good deal' is unclear; 'help me get a good deal' is more appropriate.

× I always compare price when I shopping because this will save my money and have a good deal.

✓ I always compare prices when I shop because this will save me money and help me get a good deal.

The verb 'shopping' is incorrectly used instead of the base form 'shop' after 'I'. The present simple tense requires the base verb form after 'I'.

× Of course, I always worried about the wrong choice.

✓ Of course, I am always worried about making the wrong choice.

The verb 'worried' is incorrectly used in the past tense form; it should be the present tense 'am worried' to match 'always'. Also, 'about the wrong choice' is better expressed as 'about making the wrong choice' for clarity.

× Not away. Sometimes cheapest products will better than expensive product.

✓ Not always. Sometimes the cheapest products are better than expensive products.

'Not away' is a misspelling of 'Not always'. 'Cheapest' should be preceded by 'the' as it is a superlative adjective. 'Will better' is incorrect; the correct form is 'are better' to express a general truth. Also, 'expensive product' should be plural 'expensive products' to match 'products'.