Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of 'shopping give me a relaxed time', say 'shopping gives me a relaxing time'.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it gives me a relaxing time and I find it interesting. Moreover, shopping allows me to spend quality time with friends or family, making it a fun social activity.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to answer directly and clearly, using linking words to explain your reasons. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'now'.

예시: Sometimes I compare prices, especially when I shop for food. I do this because many stores offer different prices, so I want to find the best deal.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your reasons with specific details. Avoid hesitations and incomplete thoughts.

예시: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop, especially during sales. This is because there are many options and I feel confused about which one to choose.

제안: Your answer is contradictory and unclear. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Avoid filler words and incorrect grammar.

예시: Sometimes expensive products are better than cheaper ones because they often have higher quality. However, this is not always true, so I think it depends on the product.

× shopping give me a relaxed time and it's interesting for me

✓ shopping gives me a relaxed time and it's interesting for me

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'shopping'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue where the verb must match the subject in number.

× Shopping also guides me change to spend time with friends or family the making it a fun social activity

✓ Shopping also gives me a chance to spend time with friends or family, making it a fun social activity

The phrase 'guides me change' is incorrect; it should be 'gives me a chance' to express opportunity. Also, 'the making it' is incorrect; it should be 'making it' as a participle phrase modifying the previous clause. This corrects verb usage and sentence structure.

× For the example in shopping for food I compare prices and shop umm, especially umm in so many magaz

✓ For example, when shopping for food, I compare prices and shop, especially in many magazines

The phrase 'For the example in shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'For example, when shopping'. Also, 'in so many magaz' is incomplete and should be 'in many magazines'. Prepositions and article usage are corrected here.

× because firstly I I am see this closers and the witted and then I

✓ because firstly I see these clothes and the fitted ones, and then I...

The phrase 'I am see' is incorrect; it should be 'I see'. Also, 'this closers' should be 'these clothes' to match plural form. 'The witted' is unclear but likely intended as 'the fitted ones'. Pronoun and noun usage corrected for clarity and grammar.

× expensive products are always better than cheap ones. We know it. But, uh. When we buy expensive products, it's not isn't good

✓ expensive products are always better than cheap ones. We know that. But, when we buy expensive products, they are not always good

The phrase 'it's not isn't good' is incorrect and confusing; it should be 'they are not always good' to refer to 'products' plural. Also, 'We know it' is better as 'We know that'. This corrects adjective and verb usage for clarity.