Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to make it more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'shopping' multiple times, you can use pronouns or synonyms. Also, try to add a linking phrase to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially on weekends since my weekdays are quite busy, so I usually do it on Saturdays and Sundays.

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and formal. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repeating 'compare prices' too often. Also, use linking words to connect your reasons smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to get the best value for my money. Therefore, I check different brands and stores before making a purchase.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrasing like 'very indifferent'. Try to express your difficulty more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, provide a reason or example to support your answer with linking words.

예시: Yes, sometimes it's hard to choose between products because they have similar quality and prices, so I have to think carefully before deciding.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

예시: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. Sometimes, expensive items are overpriced and don't offer better quality than cheaper ones. For example, brand new clothes can be expensive but not necessarily of higher quality.

× I do most of my shopping on Saturdays and Sundays.

✓ I do most of my shopping during Saturdays and Sundays.

The preposition 'on' is typically used for specific days, but when referring to a general period like weekends, 'during' is more appropriate to indicate the time frame.

× So I do compare prices between brands and shop locations anytime I go on shopping.

✓ So I do compare prices between brands and shop locations anytime I go shopping.

The phrase 'go on shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'on'.

× Sometimes I find it very indifferent to make choices between products of the same quality and of the same prices.

✓ Sometimes I find it very difficult to make choices between products of the same quality and the same price.

The word 'indifferent' is incorrectly used here; the correct adjective is 'difficult' to express the challenge in making choices. Also, 'prices' should be singular 'price' when referring to the same price point.

× See the fact that expensive products are better than cheap ones because there are some goods which are overpriced and thus are lots of the best quality as compared to ones that have very low pricing.

✓ I believe that expensive products are not always better than cheap ones because some goods are overpriced and do not have better quality compared to those with lower prices.

The original sentence is confusing and structurally incorrect. It lacks clarity and proper conjunctions. The correction improves clarity, corrects sentence structure, and conveys the intended meaning more effectively.

× For instance getting and brand new clothes.

✓ For instance, getting brand new clothes.

The phrase 'getting and brand new clothes' is incorrect. The conjunction 'and' is unnecessary and should be removed. Also, a comma after 'For instance' improves readability.