Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use the present perfect tense to indicate duration. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Exemplo: I work for a luxury brand and have been doing so for about four years.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats information and includes filler words. Try to answer directly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about your role and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: I have worked for a luxury brand for about four years, where I advise customers on choosing the best daily looks, such as selecting handbags that suit their style.

Sugestão: Your answer is brief and includes filler words. Try to expand your response with specific reasons and use linking words to make it more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it's a good place to work because the environment is friendly and supportive, which helps me stay motivated.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains filler words. Try to express your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I like my workplace because it offers a relaxing environment where I can unwind after a busy day.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words. Try to organise your ideas logically using linking words and clarify what the 'ALS test' is, if possible.

Exemplo: To be honest, I don't have many future work plans because things are constantly changing. However, I am currently preparing for the IELTS test, as I believe it's something I can control.

× I work for a luxury brand about four years.

✓ I have worked for a luxury brand for about four years.

The sentence describes an action that started in the past and continues to the present, so the present perfect tense 'have worked' is appropriate instead of simple present 'work'. Also, the preposition 'for' is needed before the duration.

× I work for luxury brand for about four years and uh, my whole duty is to provide suggestions about how to choose the best look for your daily life.

✓ I have worked for a luxury brand for about four years and, uh, my whole duty is to provide suggestions about how to choose the best look for your daily life.

The action of working started in the past and continues, so present perfect 'have worked' is correct. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'luxury brand'. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× I work for luxury brand for about four years and uh, my whole duty is to provide suggestions about how to choose the best look for your daily life. For example, the handbag, such as the handbag.

✓ I have worked for a luxury brand for about four years and, uh, my whole duty is to provide suggestions about how to choose the best look for your daily life. For example, handbags, such as handbags.

The article 'a' is missing before 'luxury brand'. Also, 'the handbag' is repeated unnecessarily and should be plural 'handbags' to generalise the example. The phrase 'such as the handbag' is redundant and can be simplified.

× Uh, it depends. Umm, I like the place I work because my work provide a good environment for me to come down.

✓ Uh, it depends. Umm, I like the place I work because my work provides a good environment for me to come down.

The subject 'my work' is singular, so the verb should be 'provides' to agree in number.

× I to be honest, I don't have many plans about my future work because nowadays everything is changing.

✓ To be honest, I don't have many plans about my future work because nowadays everything is changing.

The phrase 'I to be honest' is incorrect in word order. The correct structure is 'To be honest, I...'. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.