Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to avoid minor grammatical errors such as 'team work' which should be 'teamwork'. Also, consider using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'which'.

Exemplo: Currently, I work as a Registered Intensive Care Nurse, and I really enjoy my job because it is both challenging and rewarding. Moreover, the teamwork in the hospital motivates me every day to improve my skills and provide the best care possible.

Sugestão: Your answer provides useful information but is incomplete and contains some language inaccuracies. To improve, complete your sentences and use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, 'administering injections' and 'learning new procedures'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas coherently.

Exemplo: I work at Our Savior Hospital located in Ikebu Layout, Imo State, Nigeria. My duties include administering injections, providing palm feeding for patients on NG tubes, caring for patients, and managing some administrative tasks. Additionally, I strive to improve my medical skills by learning new procedures and staying updated with the latest practices.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'strengthen relationship' and 'motivating and enjoy'. To improve, use plural forms where appropriate and ensure adjectives agree with nouns. Also, use linking words to enhance coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, my hospital is a great place to work because it has a friendly and supportive atmosphere. Furthermore, the management encourages everyone to learn new skills, which helps improve the quality of patient care and strengthens relationships with patients. This focus on professional development makes the workplace motivating and enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but contains some grammatical inconsistencies, such as 'encourages' followed by 'foster' instead of 'fosters', and 'shares' followed by 'help' instead of 'helps'. To improve, ensure subject-verb agreement and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Absolutely. I really enjoy working at my workplace because it encourages everyone to learn new skills and fosters a friendly atmosphere where colleagues support each other. For instance, my team often shares useful advice and helps each other improve, which makes the environment very motivating and enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but there are some language inaccuracies such as 'varieties of medical procedures' which should be 'a variety of medical procedures'. Also, the last sentence is incomplete. To improve, complete your thoughts and use precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: In the future, I would love to work in a large federal hospital where I can gain experience in a variety of medical procedures and different hospital settings. For example, I am planning to relocate to Australia to broaden my professional skills and learn from a diverse medical environment. This opportunity would help me to develop both my clinical expertise and cultural understanding.

× I work at our Savior hospital located in Ikebu layout, Imo State, Nigeria.

✓ I work in Our Savior Hospital located in Ikebu Layout, Imo State, Nigeria.

The correct preposition to use with locations such as hospitals is 'in' rather than 'at'. Also, proper nouns like 'Our Savior Hospital' and 'Ikebu Layout' should be capitalised for correct grammar and clarity.

× My duty includes administering injection, giving palm feeding for those on Ng 2, caring for patients and managing some administrative tasks.

✓ My duties include administering injections, giving palm feeding for those on NG 2, caring for patients, and managing some administrative tasks.

The word 'duty' should be plural 'duties' to match the list of multiple tasks. Also, 'injection' should be plural 'injections' because it refers to multiple instances. Commas are added for clarity in the list.

× I also strive to improve my medical skills by learning new procedure and staying.

✓ I also strive to improve my medical skills by learning new procedures and staying updated.

The noun 'procedure' should be plural 'procedures' to match the context of learning multiple methods. The phrase 'staying' is incomplete and needs an object; 'staying updated' completes the meaning appropriately.

× The management encourages everyone to learn new skills, which helps improve the quality of patient care and strengthen relationship with patients.

✓ The management encourages everyone to learn new skills, which helps improve the quality of patient care and strengthen relationships with patients.

The noun 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' because it refers to multiple interactions with patients. This ensures subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× This focus on professional development makes the workplace motivating and enjoy.

✓ This focus on professional development makes the workplace motivating and enjoyable.

The adjective 'enjoy' is incorrect here; the correct adjective form is 'enjoyable' to describe the workplace. 'Motivating' is an adjective, so 'enjoyable' should be used to maintain parallel structure.

× Absolutely. I really enjoy working at my workplace because it encourages everyone to learn new skills and foster a friendly atmosphere where colleagues support each other.

✓ Absolutely. I really enjoy working at my workplace because it encourages everyone to learn new skills and fosters a friendly atmosphere where colleagues support each other.

The verb 'foster' should be in the third person singular form 'fosters' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to the workplace). This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× For instance, my team often shares useful advice and help each other improve, which makes the environment very motivating and enjoyable.

✓ For instance, my team often shares useful advice and helps each other improve, which makes the environment very motivating and enjoyable.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'my team'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× In the future, I would love to work in a large federal hospital where I can gain experience in varieties of medical procedures and different hospital settings.

✓ In the future, I would love to work in a large federal hospital where I can gain experience in a variety of medical procedures and different hospital settings.

The phrase 'varieties of medical procedures' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a variety of medical procedures' to indicate a range of procedures. 'Varieties' is used for countable types, but 'a variety of' is the correct expression here.

× For example, I am planning to relocate to Australia to broaden my professional skills and learn from a diverse medical environment.

✓ For example, I am planning to relocate to Australia to broaden my professional skills and to learn from a diverse medical environment.

To maintain parallel structure, the verb phrase 'to learn' should be included after 'and' to match 'to broaden'. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.