Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to combine your ideas into a single, fluent sentence. Also, specify the level of education to enrich your response.

Exemplo: I am currently a student; I recently graduated from Balmiki Education Foundation, Bertha Mall, where I completed my high school education.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and clear, but you could improve coherence by using linking words and making the response more natural. Also, avoid repeating 'I don't work' directly; instead, explain your situation smoothly.

Exemplo: I don't work at the moment because I am focusing on my studies, and I plan to start university next year to continue my education.

Sugestão: Your answer is honest but could be improved by rephrasing to sound more natural and avoiding repetition. You can also briefly explain why you cannot answer the question.

Exemplo: Since I haven't worked before, I'm not sure whether it is a good place to work.

Sugestão: This answer is too brief and sounds abrupt. Try to expand your response by explaining your situation and your preferences regarding future work.

Exemplo: I don't work currently, but I would like to work in a friendly and supportive environment when I start my career.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by refining some phrases for naturalness.

Exemplo: I plan to complete a nursing degree at university, work as a registered nurse in a hospital, and then pursue a master's degree to further my education.

× I recently graduated my high school uh from Balmiki Education Foundation, Bertha Mall.

✓ I recently graduated from my high school, Balmiki Education Foundation, Bertha Mall.

The verb 'graduated' is correctly in the past tense, but the preposition 'from' is missing before 'my high school'. The phrase 'graduated my high school' is incorrect; it should be 'graduated from my high school'. This is a common preposition usage error (related to problem type 11), but since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes listed, and preposition errors are listed as 11, this correction is valid here.

× I recently graduated my high school uh from Balmiki Education Foundation, Bertha Mall.

✓ I recently graduated from my high school, Balmiki Education Foundation, Bertha Mall.

The verb 'graduate' requires the preposition 'from' when indicating the institution. The original sentence lacks 'from' before 'my high school', which is incorrect. Adding 'from' corrects the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I have planned to complete my nursing in a university and work as a registered nurse for a hospital and then pursue further masters education.

✓ I have planned to complete my nursing at a university and work as a registered nurse in a hospital and then pursue further master's education.

The prepositions 'in' and 'for' are incorrectly used here. The correct preposition for attending an institution is 'at' (complete my nursing at a university). For working in a hospital, 'in' is appropriate (work as a registered nurse in a hospital). Also, 'masters education' should be 'master's education' to indicate possession.