Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答内容较丰富，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意冠词使用（a wide range），避免重复表达（Now I'm very satisfied），并简化句子使其更自然流畅。

Exemplo: I run a small bakery where I sell a wide range of desserts, like chocolate cakes and cheesecakes. I really enjoy my job because I love seeing customers happy when they taste my desserts.

Sugestão: 回答中出现了明显的词汇错误（pet trees应为pastries），且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，使用连词使句子更连贯，并补充冠词。

Exemplo: I work at a small bakery where I can experiment with different kinds of pastries. All my coworkers are very nice and friendly, which makes me feel like part of a family.

Sugestão: 回答中存在词汇错误（pathways应为pastries），句子不完整且表达重复。建议使用准确词汇，避免重复，完善句子结构，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, it's a good place to work because I can experiment with different kinds of pastries, which helps me become more creative. Also, the working atmosphere is pleasant, and my coworkers are very friendly, making me feel like part of a team.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和句子未完成，表达重复（make me makes me），建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并完成句子表达完整意思。

Exemplo: Yes, I really like my workplace because it allows me to explore different kinds of pastries, which gives me a sense of satisfaction. Also, as the owner, I have more free time to manage my schedule.

Sugestão: 回答内容明确，但存在语法错误（ha have），表达略显简单。建议注意语法准确性，使用更丰富的词汇和句型，使表达更自然。

Exemplo: In the future, I plan to go to Paris to learn advanced baking techniques because I want to improve my skills. Paris has some of the best pastry schools, and I believe studying there will help me become a better baker.

× Currently, I'm running a small bakery where I sell wide range of desserts such as chocolate cakes and cheesecakes.

✓ Currently, I'm running a small bakery where I sell a wide range of desserts such as chocolate cakes and cheesecakes.

这里缺少冠词“a”，应为“a wide range”，表示“一系列”。这是单复数搭配问题，需加冠词使表达完整。

× Currently I'm working at a small bakery where I can experiment with different kinds of pet trees and all of my coworkers are very nice and friendly which made me feel like part of family.

✓ Currently I'm working at a small bakery where I can experiment with different kinds of pastries and all of my coworkers are very nice and friendly which make me feel like part of the family.

原句中“pet trees”应为“pastries”（糕点），是词汇错误。且“which made me feel”时态不一致，应为“which make me feel”。“part of family”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“part of the family”。

× Yes, it's a good place to work because it's a place where I can experiment with different kinds of pathways which can help me to become more creative. And I really like current working atmosphere. All my coworkers are very nice and friendly which made me feel like a part of.

✓ Yes, it's a good place to work because it's a place where I can experiment with different kinds of pastries which can help me to become more creative. And I really like the current working atmosphere. All my coworkers are very nice and friendly which make me feel like a part of the family.

“pathways”应为“pastries”，词汇错误。缺少定冠词“the”修饰“current working atmosphere”和“part of the family”。“which made me feel”时态不一致，应为“which make me feel”。

× Yes, I really like the place where I work because it allows me to explore different kinds of pastries which make me makes me feel a sense of satisfaction and also I'm a boss now so this job allows me to have more free time to.

✓ Yes, I really like the place where I work because it allows me to explore different kinds of pastries which make me feel a sense of satisfaction and also I'm a boss now so this job allows me to have more free time.

“make me makes me”重复，应为“make me”。这是单复数搭配问题，动词应与复数主语“pastries”一致。

× In the future I might go to Paris to learn some baking techniques because I really want to improve my baking skills and Paris ha have some advanced pastry schools. I believe I would improve my skills in there.

✓ In the future I might go to Paris to learn some baking techniques because I really want to improve my baking skills and Paris has some advanced pastry schools. I believe I will improve my skills there.

“ha have”是拼写错误，应为“has”。“would improve”表达不确定，结合上下文应使用“will improve”表示未来肯定。去掉“in”前置词，直接用“there”。