Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'I work at an academy'와 같이 전치사를 정확히 사용하고, 'I have been working for four years'로 현재완료 진행형을 사용하세요. 또한, 중복된 단어를 피하고 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

Exemplo: I work at an academy where I teach mathematics to middle and high school students. I have been working there for four years.

Sugestão: 의미 전달이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'I work in my neighborhood in Swan'과 같이 명확히 표현하고, 'It takes me 10 minutes to get there'로 시간을 표현하세요.

Exemplo: I work in my neighborhood in Swan. It takes me about 10 minutes to get there, so it's very convenient.

Sugestão: 문장이 불완전하고 연결이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 이유를 명확히 하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'because my coworkers are kind and my boss gives generous bonuses'처럼 표현하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because my coworkers are very kind and generous. Moreover, my boss gives us generous incentive bonuses, which motivates me a lot.

Sugestão: 의미가 혼동되고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'I like working from home because it is convenient and reduces my commuting time'와 같이 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer working from home because it is very convenient and helps me reduce the time I spend commuting to the office.

Sugestão: 'Policemaker'라는 단어는 일반적이지 않습니다. 대신 'policy maker'를 사용하고, 문법과 어휘를 정확히 하세요. 예를 들어, 'I want to be a policy maker because they help improve people's lives'라고 표현하세요.

Exemplo: I want to become a policy maker because they can help improve people's lives and enhance their quality of life.

× I I have been worked for four years.

✓ I have been working for four years.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'have been worked' which is not a correct present perfect continuous form. The correct form is 'have been working' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present.

× I walk in my neighborhood in Swan.

✓ I work in my neighborhood in Swan.

The sentence uses 'walk' instead of 'work' which changes the meaning. The question is about work, so 'work' is the correct verb here.

× I can go there by working 10 minutes.

✓ I can get there by walking 10 minutes.

The phrase 'by working 10 minutes' is incorrect. The intended meaning is traveling by foot, so 'walking' is the correct gerund form, and 'get there' fits better than 'go there' in this context.

× Yes it is good place to work because.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to work because.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'good place'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article.

× My coworker is very kind and generous, especially my boss gives a lot of incentive bonus so also my students also.

✓ My coworkers are very kind and generous, especially my boss who gives a lot of incentive bonuses, and so do my students.

The original sentence has multiple issues: singular/plural inconsistency, run-on sentence, and awkward phrasing. Correcting to plural 'coworkers', adding relative clause 'who gives', pluralizing 'bonuses', and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× I like to my home because it is very convenient and I can reduce time to commute to my office.

✓ I like my home because it is very convenient and I can reduce the time to commute to my office.

The phrase 'like to my home' is incorrect; 'like my home' is correct. Also, 'reduce time' should be 'reduce the time' to specify the commuting time.

× I want to be a policemaker because police maker can help people lives and improve their life quality.

✓ I want to be a policymaker because a policymaker can help people's lives and improve their quality of life.

The word 'policemaker' is a misspelling; the correct term is 'policymaker'. Also, 'people lives' should be 'people's lives' to show possession, and 'life quality' is better expressed as 'quality of life'.