Part 1
Examinador
Do you work or are you a student?
Candidato
Now I work as a cook in a restaurant. My job is handle ingredients and make cold food.
Examinador
Where do you work?>
Candidato
I work as a cook in a restaurant. My job is handle ingredients and make cold food.
Examinador
Is it a good place to work?
Candidato
No, I don't like the workplace environment of a cook because it's too hot. I'm someone who is afraid of heat, so it's tough working in the kitchen in summer.
Examinador
Would you like the place where you work?
Candidato
No, I don't like the working environment of a cook because it's too hot. I'm someone who is really afraid of heat, so it's tough working in the kitchen in summer.
Examinador
What are your future work plans?
Candidato
If I could choice I'd like to be an animals keeper. I've always loved animals and feeding them make me happy.
Do you work or are you a student?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答时语法不够准确,缺少冠词和动词形式错误,且表达较为简单。建议注意动词时态和冠词的使用,丰富句子结构,使回答更自然流畅。
Exemplo: I currently work as a cook in a restaurant. My main responsibilities include handling ingredients and preparing cold dishes.
Where do you work?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答重复了前一个问题的内容,缺乏具体细节。建议直接回答地点,并补充一些具体信息,使回答更丰富。
Exemplo: I work in a popular restaurant located downtown, where I specialize in preparing cold dishes.
Is it a good place to work?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答表达了个人感受,内容具体,但句子结构较简单。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯,同时丰富词汇。
Exemplo: I don't find the kitchen a comfortable place to work because it's very hot, especially in summer. Since I am sensitive to heat, it can be quite challenging.
Would you like the place where you work?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答内容与前一问题重复,缺乏新信息。建议在回答中加入更多细节或个人感受,避免重复。
Exemplo: I wouldn't prefer to work in the kitchen because the heat makes it uncomfortable for me, especially during the hot summer months.
What are your future work plans?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误,如动词形式和冠词使用不当。建议注意语法准确性,并丰富表达,使回答更自然。
Exemplo: If I had the choice, I would like to become an animal keeper because I have always loved animals, and feeding them brings me joy.
× My job is handle ingredients and make cold food.
✓ My job is handling ingredients and making cold food.
句子中“is”后面应接动名词形式,表示工作内容。应将“handle”和“make”改为“handling”和“making”。
× My job is handle ingredients and make cold food.
✓ My job is to handle ingredients and to make cold food.
“is”后面可以接不定式“to do”结构,表示职责。此处可改为“to handle”和“to make”。
× feeding them make me happy.
✓ feeding them makes me happy.
主语“feeding”是动名词单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“makes”。