Work— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you work or are you a student?
Candidato
I'm currently still a student but I had a part time job before last year. I was a tuition centre tutor. I teach kids about essay questions and it is a very interesting and valuable memory and experience for me.
Examinador
Where do you work?>
Candidato
Uh, I work at a tuition centre that I previously went to because my tuition teacher invited me to work there due to the lack of teachers.
Examinador
Is it a good place to work?
Candidato
Yeah, definitely is a good place to work for me because I like to interact with young people like kids because they are very cute and talkative. But sometimes it will make me headache because it it is hard to handle every kid. Yeah, but it's a good environment.
Examinador
Would you like the place where you work?
Candidato
Yes, I like the place where I work because the place that I work reminds me of being a student in the same tuition centre before. And also the environment is very good because there are many air conditioners, so we won't be very hot.
Examinador
What are your future work plans?
Candidato
I would like to study for dentistry in the future because from my perspective, I think dentist is a high paying job which I can get to earn a lot of money and I can spend the money on my families.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以简化表达，突出重点，避免冗长。
Exemplo: I'm currently a student, but I used to work part-time as a tutor at a tuition centre. I helped children with essay writing, which was a rewarding experience.
Where do you work?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答应更简洁明了，避免口头语“Uh”，并使用连词使句子更连贯。
Exemplo: I work at the tuition centre I once attended because my former teacher invited me to join due to a shortage of staff.
Is it a good place to work?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中应避免重复和语法错误，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明原因。
Exemplo: Yes, it's a great place to work because I enjoy interacting with children, who are lively and talkative. However, managing all of them can be challenging at times.
Would you like the place where you work?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答应避免重复“the place where I work”，并用更自然的表达方式连接句子。
Exemplo: Yes, I like working there because it reminds me of my time as a student at the same centre. Also, the environment is comfortable with plenty of air conditioning.
What are your future work plans?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答应更自然，避免语法错误，使用连词连接观点，并具体说明理由。
Exemplo: In the future, I plan to study dentistry because it's a well-paid profession, and I want to support my family financially.
Gramática
× I teach kids about essay questions and it is a very interesting and valuable memory and experience for me.
✓ I taught kids about essay questions and it was a very interesting and valuable memory and experience for me.
这里描述的是过去的经历，应该使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态'teach'和'is'，与时间状况不符。建议将'teach'改为'taught'，'is'改为'was'。
× Yeah, definitely is a good place to work for me because I like to interact with young people like kids because they are very cute and talkative.
✓ Yeah, it definitely is a good place to work for me because I like to interact with young people like kids because they are very cute and talkative.
句子缺少主语，导致语法错误。'is'是第三人称单数形式，需要有主语'it'。建议在'definitely'前加上'it'。
× But sometimes it will make me headache because it it is hard to handle every kid.
✓ But sometimes it makes me have a headache because it is hard to handle every kid.
'make me headache'表达不正确，应该用'makes me have a headache'或'sometimes it gives me a headache'。此外，'will'在这里不合适，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时。
× I can spend the money on my families.
✓ I can spend the money on my family.
'families'是复数，表示多个家庭，语境中应指自己的家庭，使用单数'family'更合适。
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