Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: I am currently working at a bakery shop where I sell baked goods and help with minor repairs.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: I work at a bakery shop about two kilometers from my house, which is very convenient because I can easily commute there every day.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm, ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để thể hiện ý kiến rõ ràng.

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because it is close to my home and easy to commute to every day.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is close to my house, making commuting very easy and convenient. The staff are also very friendly and helpful.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng, thiếu cấu trúc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để thể hiện kế hoạch tương lai.

Exemplo: At the moment, I don't have specific plans, but if I change my job in the future, I would like to try working in a different shop to gain new experiences.

× My job is. Repair and selling the goods. To.

✓ My job is repairing and selling goods.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'My job is repairing and selling goods' is a complete sentence that correctly uses the gerund form to describe job duties.

× I work near my house about two kilometers away.

✓ I work near my house, about two kilometers away.

A comma is needed to separate the clauses for clarity. The preposition 'near' is correctly used, but punctuation improves readability.

× I realize this location because it's very convenient and easy to commute to.

✓ I chose this location because it's very convenient and easy to commute to.

'Realize' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'chose' to indicate selection. Also, ending a sentence with a preposition is acceptable here but can be improved by rephrasing.

× Also the the language here make it listen to travel and from work every days.

✓ Also, the people here make it easy to travel to and from work every day.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Language' is likely a mistake for 'people'. 'Make it listen to travel' is incorrect; it should be 'make it easy to travel'. 'Every days' should be 'every day'.

× This is a good light to get the MacArthur ***** and the boat is also helpful.

✓ This is a good location to get the MacArthur ***** and the boat is also helpful.

'Light' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'location'. The sentence needs clarification and correction of word choice.

× Uh, I like this shop because it's near my house and too easy to commute. Comm.

✓ I like this shop because it's near my house and very easy to commute to.

'Too easy' is incorrect; 'very easy' is appropriate. The sentence ends abruptly with 'Comm.', which should be removed or completed.

× Say I like the the play where I work be because it's even low to my house with my commuting.

✓ I like the place where I work because it's very close to my house, making commuting easy.

'Say' is unnecessary. 'Play' should be 'place'. 'Be because' is incorrect. 'Even low' should be 'very close'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Very easy and convenient addition to my college. Very friendly and my very helpful.

✓ It is very easy and convenient for me as a college student. The people are very friendly and helpful.

The original sentences are fragments and unclear. They are corrected to complete sentences with proper adjectives and structure.

× At the moment I don't have a future, but in the future, but if I change the job, I will try another one, another chop, because I like, because I like to.

✓ At the moment, I don't have specific future plans, but if I change my job, I will try another one because I like to explore new opportunities.

The original sentence is repetitive and fragmented. It is corrected to a coherent sentence expressing future intentions clearly.