Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat clear but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise, and avoid repeating phrases. Also, correct prepositions like 'in abroad' to 'abroad'.

Exemplo: I am currently a student. I recently passed an intermediate exam and plan to continue my education abroad. My favorite subject is psychology because I find it fascinating to understand how people think and behave.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a direct answer first, then add supporting details clearly and logically. Avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Exemplo: I don't work because I am a student. I recently passed an intermediate exam and plan to pursue higher education in Australia soon.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct articles and plural forms, and try to link ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Actually, I don't work at the moment because I'm a student. However, I think it would be a good place to work because it offers many opportunities for personal growth. Since I plan to study abroad in the future, I am focusing on my studies now.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing due to incorrect word usage and grammar. Make sure to use correct words ('work' instead of 'walk') and express your feelings clearly and naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is a fantastic part of my life. I really appreciate being there.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to state your future career goal clearly and explain your reasons logically and simply.

Exemplo: My future plan is to become a doctor because it is a respected and well-known profession in my country. I believe it will help me get a good job and help others.

× I plan to continue my education in abroad.

✓ I plan to continue my education abroad.

The preposition 'in' is not used before 'abroad'. 'Abroad' itself means 'in or to a foreign country', so the correct phrase is 'continue my education abroad'.

× My favorite subject is psychology because it finds because it finds a fascinating to understand how people think and behave.

✓ My favorite subject is psychology because I find it fascinating to understand how people think and behave.

The sentence has repetition and incorrect word usage. 'It finds because it finds a fascinating' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I find it fascinating' where 'find' is a verb meaning 'consider'.

× I am I not do I don't work uh, recently I passed in intermediate exam in so shortly college and I my plan I and now I plan to higher education in Australia. I don't.

✓ I am a student. I don't work. Recently, I passed an intermediate exam in a college, and now I plan to pursue higher education in Australia.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. It lacks proper sentence structure and connectors. The correction separates ideas into clear sentences and uses appropriate articles and verb forms.

× Recently I passed in intermediate exam in so shortly college and I my plan I and now I plan to higher education in Australia.

✓ Recently, I passed an intermediate exam in a college, and now I plan to pursue higher education in Australia.

The preposition 'in' before 'intermediate exam' is incorrect; it should be 'passed an intermediate exam'. Also, 'in so shortly college' is incorrect; it should be 'in a college'. 'Plan to higher education' is incorrect; it should be 'plan to pursue higher education'.

× I think place would be good places to work because it offers many opportunity for personal growth.

✓ I think the place would be a good place to work because it offers many opportunities for personal growth.

The sentence has inconsistent singular/plural forms. 'Place' and 'places' are mixed incorrectly. Also, 'many opportunity' should be 'many opportunities' because 'opportunity' is countable and plural is needed here.

× I appreciate to this place.

✓ I appreciate this place.

The verb 'appreciate' does not require the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'I appreciate this place'. Adding 'to' is incorrect.

× My future plan is the doctor because it helps to meet it helps to man a get good job and my this is the very famous job in our country so I wish my felon is doctor.

✓ My future plan is to be a doctor because it helps to get a good job, and this is a very famous job in our country, so I wish my future profession is a doctor.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear phrases. 'My future plan is the doctor' should be 'My future plan is to be a doctor'. 'It helps to meet it helps to man a get good job' is unclear and corrected to 'it helps to get a good job'. 'My felon' is incorrect; likely meant 'my future profession'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.