Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and informative but could be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to use simpler sentence structures and avoid repeating information unnecessarily.

Exemplo: I am currently working full-time as an auditor at the Federal Board of Revenue (FBR). My job involves auditing taxpayers and detecting any tax evasion.

Sugestão: Your answer provides the necessary information but lacks fluency and has some awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words and smoother sentence flow to make your answer more natural and coherent.

Exemplo: I work at the Large Taxpayer Office of the FBR, which is located in the PRC Tower in the Lalazar area.

Sugestão: Your answer is positive and detailed but could be improved by avoiding redundancy and using more precise vocabulary. Also, try to link your ideas more smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it's a great place to work because my seniors and colleagues are very cooperative. Moreover, the supportive atmosphere makes it easy for everyone to help each other.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words. Try to be more concise and avoid hesitation sounds to make your response more fluent and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I really like my workplace because I spend a large part of my day there. I believe it's important to enjoy your work environment since we spend so much time at work.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains some hesitation and minor grammatical errors. Try to speak more confidently and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: My plan is to stay in this job for at least three more years because the experience I am gaining is valuable and will benefit my future career. Therefore, I am not considering changing jobs at the moment.

× My nature of work includes auditing different tax payer and identifying tax evasion if any.

✓ My nature of work includes auditing different taxpayers and identifying tax evasion if any.

The word 'tax payer' should be pluralized to 'taxpayers' because it refers to multiple individuals or entities subject to tax. Using the plural form is necessary to match the context of auditing various taxpayers.

× Well I work at FB Rs office which is named as Large taxpayer office and it is located at in the building PRC tower and the area is named as Lalazar.

✓ Well, I work at FBR's office, which is named the Large Taxpayer Office, and it is located in the PRC Tower building in the area named Lalazar.

The preposition 'at in' is incorrect; only one preposition should be used. 'Located in' is appropriate for buildings. Also, 'named as' should be 'named' or 'called'. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition use and clarity.

× Yes, in my opinion, it's a amazing place to be as the seniors and the colleagues are super cooperative and the work environment atmosphere is also very good.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, it's an amazing place to be as the seniors and colleagues are very cooperative and the work environment is also very good.

The article 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an'. Also, 'super cooperative' is informal; 'very cooperative' is more appropriate. 'Work environment atmosphere' is redundant; 'work environment' suffices.

× People are supportive out there and they're always there to help each other.

✓ People are supportive there and are always willing to help each other.

The phrase 'out there' is informal and unnecessary. Replacing it with 'there' makes the sentence clearer and more formal. Also, 'they're always there' is repetitive; simplifying improves clarity.

× Yes, I think I love my workplace because this is the place where I spend like a significant portion of my day.

✓ Yes, I think I love my workplace because it is the place where I spend a significant portion of my day.

Using 'this' is less appropriate when referring to a place already mentioned; 'it' is better. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and informal in this context.

× And, uh, I think everyone should like their workplace, uh, because they're spending majority of their days at their workplace.

✓ And, I think everyone should like their workplace because they spend the majority of their days there.

The phrase 'they're spending majority' is incorrect; 'they spend the majority' is correct. Also, 'at their workplace' is repetitive; 'there' suffices.

× Therefore, I'm not looking for switching any job right now and I, I'll be continue working here.

✓ Therefore, I'm not looking to switch any job right now and I will continue working here.

The phrase 'looking for switching' is incorrect; the correct form is 'looking to switch'. Also, 'I'll be continue' is incorrect; it should be 'I will continue'.