Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免重复和犹豫，语言更流畅自然。可以直接说“I'm currently working at a futures company.”，并适当补充工作内容以丰富答案。

Exemplo: I'm currently working at a futures company where I handle market analysis and client communications.

Sugestão: 回答中有较多犹豫和重复，句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地描述地点，并补充具体细节。

Exemplo: My office is near Taipei train station, surrounded by many restaurants and other office buildings.

Sugestão: 表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并解释原因。

Exemplo: It might be good for some, but I find it distracting because there are many things to do continuously, which affects my focus.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议用更准确的句子表达对上司的不满，并说明原因。

Exemplo: I don't like my workplace because although the office is nice, my supervisor doesn't recognize my potential, which is very frustrating for me.

Sugestão: 回答中有犹豫和重复，表达不够流畅。建议直接表达计划，并补充具体细节。

Exemplo: For now, I'm focusing on applying for a master's degree and will decide my future work plans based on the results.

× I'm I'm currently working at a futures company.

✓ I'm currently working at a futures company.

句子中重复使用了“I’m”，属于多余的词语，应删除一个以保持句子简洁和正确。

× My office is uh, close to the Taipei train station and there are a lot of, umm, amazing food around there since it was like a a a bunch of office on there.

✓ My office is close to the Taipei train station and there is a lot of amazing food around there since there are a bunch of offices there.

“a lot of amazing food”是不可数名词，使用单数动词“is”更合适；“a bunch of office”中“office”应为复数“offices”；“on there”用法错误，应改为“there”。

× My office is uh, close to the Taipei train station and there are a lot of, umm, amazing food around there since it was like a a a bunch of office on there.

✓ My office is close to the Taipei train station and there is a lot of amazing food around there since there are a bunch of offices there.

“a bunch of office”中“office”应为复数形式“offices”，因为“a bunch of”后面接复数名词。

× It might be for some people, but not for me because I'm distracted to stable and you need to do a lot of thing completely, not completely and continuously.

✓ It might be for some people, but not for me because I'm distracted and unstable and you need to do a lot of things completely, not partially and continuously.

“distracted to stable”表达错误，应为“distracted and unstable”；“a lot of thing”中“thing”应为复数“things”；“not completely and continuously”表达不清，应改为“not partially and continuously”。

× No, I mean, the color is great, but my supervisor is not, She doesn't see, uh, she see my potential, but she just leave it right, leave it at her layer.

✓ No, I mean, the color is great, but my supervisor is not. She doesn't see, uh, she sees my potential, but she just leaves it right, leaves it at her layer.

“she see”应为第三人称单数形式“she sees”；“she just leave”应为“she just leaves”；句子中应使用句号分隔两个独立句子。

× No, I mean, the color is great, but my supervisor is not, She doesn't see, uh, she see my potential, but she just leave it right, leave it at her layer.

✓ No, I mean, the color is great, but my supervisor is not. She doesn't see, uh, she sees my potential, but she just leaves it right, leaves it at her level.

“leave it at her layer”中的“layer”用词错误，应为“level”，表示“层次”或“阶段”。

× I think for now I just, uh, focus on the umm, application for the master degree. Umm, just see how it went.

✓ I think for now I just, uh, focus on the umm, application for the master's degree. Umm, just see how it goes.

“master degree”应为“master's degree”；“just see how it went”时态不符，应为现在时“just see how it goes”，因为是当前和未来的计划。