Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Add one specific detail about what you study or when you will graduate. Use linking words if you add details.

Exemplo: I'm currently a student; I study English at a local high school and I will graduate this year. Because I'm finishing my studies soon, I'm focusing on preparing for teacher training courses.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct verb tense. Say you do not work now, then give a clear future intention with a brief reason. Avoid repeating 'school' and subjective labels like 'good teacher' without explanation.

Exemplo: I don't work at the moment, but in the future I want to teach at a primary school because I enjoy helping children learn and growing their confidence.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word for contrast. Correct small grammar mistakes and be more specific about why working abroad might also appeal to you.

Exemplo: Yes, I think schools are a great place to work because interacting with children is rewarding and boosts my mood. However, I also consider working abroad sometimes because it would let me experience new cultures and teaching methods.

Sugestão: Be concise and use natural collocations (e.g., 'I enjoy my work', 'it relieves my stress'). Avoid awkward phrases like 'I ruin my depression'. Provide one concrete example of what gives you satisfaction at work.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. I enjoy working at school because helping children learn gives me a strong sense of job satisfaction. For example, seeing a student understand a difficult topic really relieves my stress and makes my work rewarding.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement of your plans, then explain one plan with specific benefits. Correct phrases like 'go to abroad' to 'go abroad' and avoid vague terms like 'new atmosphere' — describe what you expect to experience instead.

Exemplo: I have several plans, and one is to work abroad for a few years. Working abroad would improve my teaching skills and communication because I could meet students from different backgrounds and learn new educational approaches.

× Currently I'm a student and I study at school and this year I will be graduated.

✓ Currently I'm a student and I study at school and this year I will graduate.

The phrase 'will be graduated' is incorrect in active contexts. Use 'will graduate' for the future active action. Also maintain present simple 'I study' for current routine. Suggestion: use active verbs 'graduate' rather than passive 'be graduated'.

× At the moment I do not work, but in the future I want to be a teacher and I work at school or school centers as a good teacher.

✓ At the moment I do not work, but in the future I want to be a teacher and I would like to work at schools or school centers as a good teacher.

The original mixes present 'I work' with future intention. Use 'would like to work' or 'want to work' to express future intention. Also use plural 'schools' for general places. This fixes tense consistency and meaning.

× Yes, I think it's good place to work because when you work at school with children, your mood is improving and you enjoy your work.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to work because when you work at school with children, your mood improves and you enjoy your work.

Missing article: use 'a good place'. 'Your mood is improving' is awkward for general statements; use simple present 'your mood improves'. This corrects article usage and tense/adverb choice for general truth.

× But I sometimes think that working abroad is good too.

✓ But I sometimes think that working abroad would be good too.

When expressing hypothetical or potential future action, modal 'would' is appropriate. 'Is good' suggests a definite present fact; 'would be good' matches the speculative tone.

× Yes, because I have job satisfaction where at my workplace.

✓ Yes, because I have job satisfaction at my workplace.

The phrase 'where at my workplace' is redundant and ungrammatical. Remove 'where' to form correct prepositional phrase 'at my workplace'.

× For example, when I work at school I feel more enjoyable and I ruin my depression, stress and distractions.

✓ For example, when I work at school I enjoy myself more and I reduce my depression, stress and distractions.

'Feel more enjoyable' is wrong because enjoyable describes something that causes enjoyment; use 'I enjoy myself' or 'I feel happier'. 'Ruin my depression' is incorrect; use 'reduce' or 'relieve' for negative feelings. Also plural consistency: 'distractions' is fine but pair with 'reduce'.

× It is good to place to work at school.

✓ It is a good place to work, at school.

Missing article: use 'a good place'. The original word order is awkward; rephrase to 'It is a good place to work' optionally add 'at school' for clarity.

× I have many future work plans. One of them is working abroad.

✓ I have many future work plans. One of them is to work abroad.

After 'one of them is', use the infinitive 'to work' rather than the gerund 'working' to express a planned action. Both can be acceptable, but 'to work abroad' is clearer and matches the following verbs.

× It helps me improve my working skills and communication because when I go to abroad, I meet new places and new atmosphere.

✓ It helps me improve my work skills and communication because when I go abroad, I experience new places and a new atmosphere.

Do not use 'to' before 'abroad'; say 'go abroad'. Use 'work skills' rather than 'working skills' for ability, and 'experience' better fits 'meet new places' meaning. Add article 'a' before 'new atmosphere'.