Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your current status, then give one or two specific supporting details (institution, subject, and part-time job). Use correct grammar (present simple for current facts) and avoid repetition. Keep it under 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I am a graduate student at Tribhuvan University, where I completed a master’s degree in physics. Currently I also work part-time as a mathematics teacher at a local school, which lets me apply what I learned in my studies.

Sugestão: Answer the location and role clearly in one sentence, then give one specific detail about your duties or what you teach. Avoid hesitations and incorrect sentence structure—use simple, correct sentences and avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: I work at a local secondary school as a mathematics teacher. I teach algebra and calculus, and I often help students solve derivative problems and prepare for exams.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion followed by 1–2 concrete reasons. Use linking words (because, and, for example) to connect ideas and avoid fillers. Describe specific positive aspects of the workplace (professional environment, colleagues, uniforms, supportive atmosphere).

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is professional and supportive. For example, staff follow a dress code and teachers cooperate to motivate students and share teaching ideas.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and then explain with specific examples. Use linking words (because, for example) and correct nouns/plurals. Mention what you enjoy about interacting with diverse students and how it benefits you as a teacher.

Exemplo: Yes, I like working there because students come from many regions of Nepal, which makes the classes culturally diverse. For example, I enjoy learning about their backgrounds and adapting my lessons to meet different students’ needs.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear plan in one topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific steps or goals. Use future tense correctly (I will, I plan to) and name the course or research area if possible. Avoid repetition and hesitations.

Exemplo: After finishing my degree, I plan to go abroad to study a postgraduate course in physics and then work as a scientific researcher. I hope to specialize in condensed matter physics and join a university research group.

× I am a graduate student of three one university.

✓ I am a graduate student at Tri-One University.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition and university name formatting; 'of three one university' is unclear. Use 'at' with institutions and capitalize proper nouns. Also correct the name to a plausible form 'Tri-One University' or the actual name. Use 'a graduate student at [University]'.

× I have completed my masters degree in Tribunal University that is a major subject in physics.

✓ I have completed my master's degree at Tribunal University, majoring in physics.

Use the possessive form 'master's degree' and the preposition 'at' for institutions. 'Major subject in physics' is awkward; use 'majoring in physics' to indicate specialization. Also add a comma for clarity.

× So I like the physical component and different ways.

✓ So I like the physical aspects and different approaches.

The phrase 'physical component and different ways' is vague and ungrammatical. 'Physical aspects' and 'different approaches' are clearer noun phrases. Ensure parallel structure when listing.

× But nowadays I join a part time job is a teacher.

✓ But nowadays I have taken a part-time job as a teacher.

Use present perfect 'have taken' to describe a recent change, hyphenate 'part-time', and use 'as a teacher' to indicate role. The original mixes verbs incorrectly and lacks proper preposition.

× I work as a school, uh, secondary school.

✓ I work at a secondary school.

Use 'work at' with locations and avoid redundancy. 'As a school' is incorrect; 'at a secondary school' correctly indicates workplace.

× A is a mathematics teacher.

✓ I am a mathematics teacher.

'A is a mathematics teacher' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I am a mathematics teacher.' Use the pronoun 'I' as the subject and 'am' as the verb.

× I know about the uh, rules of mathematics and then easily to calculate the different derivative problem problem.

✓ I know the rules of mathematics and can easily calculate different derivative problems.

Remove unnecessary 'about', use 'know the rules', and change 'to calculate' to modal 'can easily calculate' for ability. Make 'problems' plural and remove duplicated word. Keep consistent verb form.

× So uh I am is a teacher of mathematics.

✓ So I am a mathematics teacher.

The phrase 'I am is' contains two verbs; use only 'I am'. Also prefer the concise 'a mathematics teacher.'

× Yeah, it is a professional, uh, place to work.

✓ Yes, it is a professional place to work.

'Yeah' is informal; 'Yes' is more appropriate. Remove extra commas. Article 'a' is correct; simplify the phrase for fluency.

× Uh, when we go to school, uh, we where are different, uh, professional dresses also and being a simpler and, and motivator person.

✓ When we go to school, we wear different professional clothes and act as simple and motivating people.

'Where are' should be 'wear' (clothes). 'Dresses' here means clothing; use 'professional clothes'. 'Being a simpler and motivator person' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'act as simple and motivating people' or 'be simple and motivating.' Ensure verb forms match subject.

× So it is the best way, uh, to work.

✓ So it is a good way to work.

'The best way' is exaggerated; 'a good way to work' is more natural. Remove filler 'uh' and extra comma.

× I like this place because there are varieties of people and varieties of students coming from the different areas of Nepal.

✓ I like this place because there are a variety of people and students coming from different areas of Nepal.

Use 'a variety of' not 'varieties of' in this context. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'different areas' and simplify wording for natural English.

× So I like these types of place and working with a different types of people as a friend.

✓ So I like this type of place and enjoy working with different kinds of people as friends.

Use 'this type of place' (singular) to refer to the place, or 'these types of places' for plural. Match 'different kinds of people' and use plural 'friends' if plural. 'Working' should be paired with 'enjoy' to form a natural verb phrase.

× Umm, my future work is uh, uh, I completed my master degree already, so I will go to abroad and study the PSG course.

✓ Well, regarding my future work, I have already completed my master's degree, so I will go abroad to study the PSG course.

Use 'have already completed' (present perfect) for completed action relevant now and 'go abroad' (no 'to' after 'go'). Place clauses to be coherent: 'I will go abroad to study...'. Correct 'master degree' to 'master's degree'.

× And I'm being a researcher as a scientific researcher.

✓ And I want to become a scientific researcher.

'I'm being a researcher' is incorrect for future intention; use 'I want to become' or 'I hope to be'. Avoid redundancy 'researcher as a scientific researcher' by using a single clear phrase.

× So I like to tell about, uh, I like to tell about.

✓ So I would like to talk about that in more detail.

The original is repetitive and incomplete. Use 'I would like to talk about that' to express intention to explain further. Remove filler and repetition.