Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar while keeping relevant details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I'm a first-semester B.B. student at Kamala Nehru College in Phagwara. I chose this course because I am interested in business management and want to learn practical skills, such as marketing and finance, that help businesses grow.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use a single clear sentence, then optionally add a brief related detail. Correct sentence structure and word order; avoid fragments.

Exemplo: I don't work at the moment because I'm a student. I live and study in Folkwala City, where my college is located.

Sugestão: Be specific about what makes it good and use correct grammar and countable/uncountable nouns. Use linking words for clarity (for example, because, such as).

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because it has good infrastructure and services. For example, the college library, computer labs, and student counseling are better than in nearby towns.

Sugestão: Keep the answer simple and natural. Correct superlative and modal verb usage. Say why you like it with one or two specific reasons and avoid contradictory or unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I like studying there because it has friendly teachers and a peaceful environment. I would enjoy working there in the future because of the supportive staff and good facilities.

Sugestão: Provide a clearer, more structured plan and correct grammar for future intentions. Use linking words (first, then, after) and clearer verbs (study abroad, return, look for a job).

Exemplo: I don't have a fixed plan yet, but I hope to study abroad for higher education first. After completing my studies, I plan to return to my country and look for a job in business or consulting.

× Student: I'm a student of BB first semester at Kamala Nehru College, Phagwara.

✓ Student: I'm a first-semester B.B. student at Kamala Nehru College, Phagwara.

The original word order and terminology are awkward. Reorder to 'first-semester B.B. student' to follow natural English noun phrase order and use standard abbreviation formatting. Use hyphen for 'first-semester' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Suggestion: Learn common noun phrase order (numerical/ordinal + noun + field) and standard abbreviations.

× Student: I like this course because I have keen interest in business.

✓ Student: I like this course because I have a keen interest in business.

Missing the article 'a' before 'keen interest' makes the noun phrase ungrammatical. Use 'a keen interest' to make a correct noun phrase. Suggestion: Remember that singular, countable nouns usually require an article or determiner.

× Student: I want to know how we can grow our business, what the essential terms we should know.

✓ Student: I want to know how we can grow our business and what essential terms we should know.

The original is a comma splice and has incorrect word order in the second clause ('what the essential terms we should know'). Connect clauses with 'and' and reorder to 'what essential terms we should know'. Suggestion: Use conjunctions for related clauses and follow standard question-word clause order: 'what + noun + subject + verb'.

× Student: I am a student so I don't work anywhere, simply I. Studies at Folkwala city.

✓ Student: I am a student so I don't work anywhere. I study in Folkwala City.

There is a sentence fragment and incorrect verb form/capitalization. 'Simply I.' is a fragment; 'Studies' is wrong for first person singular which requires 'study'. Also use 'in' for cities and capitalize 'City' if part of proper name. Suggestion: Ensure each sentence has a subject and correct verb form (I study), and use correct prepositions with places.

× Student: Yes, it is a good place to study because at this place I get a many infrastructure and services which are not get at other places.

✓ Student: Yes, it is a good place to study because here I have much infrastructure and services that are not available elsewhere.

'a many' is ungrammatical: 'many' pairs with countable nouns, 'much' with uncountable. 'Infrastructure' is uncountable, so use 'much infrastructure' or 'many facilities'. 'which are not get at other places' is incorrect; use 'that are not available elsewhere'. Suggestion: Learn countable vs uncountable noun rules and common verbs collocating with 'infrastructure' (e.g., 'available').

× Student: Yes, I like the place where I work because I think that it is the most good place to work here in the world.

✓ Student: Yes, I like the place where I study because I think it is the best place to study in the world.

Several issues: the speaker is a student, so 'work' is inconsistent—use 'study'. 'most good' is incorrect; use the superlative 'best'. 'here in the world' is redundant; 'in the world' suffices. Also remove unnecessary 'that' for brevity. Suggestion: Use correct comparative/superlative forms and consistent vocabulary (work vs study).

× Student: So that's why I enjoy if I would like to work there.

✓ Student: That's why I would enjoy working there.

The original mixes conditional and intention awkwardly ('enjoy if I would like to work there'). Use 'would enjoy' + gerund 'working' to express hypothetical enjoyment. Keep structure concise. Suggestion: Use 'would + verb' and gerunds to describe hypothetical preferences: 'would enjoy working'.

× Student: Still, I don't have any future plans, but I think that I will go to abroad for my higher education.

✓ Student: At present I don't have any definite plans, but I think that I will go abroad for my higher education.

Use 'go abroad' (no article 'to') and improve phrasing 'Still' -> 'At present' and 'any future plans' -> 'any definite plans'. 'Go to abroad' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Remember fixed expression 'go abroad' and prefer clearer temporal adverbs.

× Student: After that I come to my country.

✓ Student: After that I will return to my country.

Sequence of future events requires future tense 'will return' rather than present 'come'. 'Come to my country' is odd; 'return to my country' is clearer. Suggestion: Use future tense for planned future actions and choose verbs that match perspective ('return' instead of 'come').

× Student: There I will get a chance to find look for a job.

✓ Student: There I will get a chance to look for a job.

'find look for a job' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use either 'find a job' or 'look for a job'. Here 'look for a job' fits the preceding phrase 'get a chance to'. Suggestion: Avoid combining synonymous verbs; choose the correct verb phrase for the intended meaning.