Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答能够传达主要信息，但有语法错误、不够简洁且有重复。建议：1) 开头用完整句子直接回答（主句）；2) 修正时态和主谓一致（例如 “I graduated six years ago” 和 “I am mainly responsible for…”）；3) 把句子控制在3–4句内，避免填充词；4) 增加一两个具体职责细节以丰富内容。

Exemplo: I graduated from university six years ago and I am currently working full-time as a management accountant at a multinational pharmaceutical company. I am mainly responsible for financial statement analysis and budgeting. I also prepare monthly variance reports to help managers make decisions.

Sugestão: 回答信息明确但语言不准确且有冗余。建议：1) 直接给出公司名和职位地点；2) 修正主谓一致（“offers”）；3) 用一两个具体例子说明公司优势（例如培训或晋升机会）；4) 避免不必要的插入词如 “well”。

Exemplo: I currently work for Merck, an international pharmaceutical company. It is a large company that offers a good salary and provides regular training programs and clear promotion paths for employees.

Sugestão: 回答肯定但表达混乱、有语法错误且缺少具体例证。建议：1) 用一两句直接说明原因；2) 使用连接词使句子连贯（e.g. because, for example）；3) 给出具体福利或例子（如弹性工作制、育婴假）；4) 避免重复公司名或拼写错误。

Exemplo: Yes, it is a very good place to work because the working environment is supportive and my manager is helpful. For example, the company offers flexible hours and generous maternity leave policies for women.

Sugestão: 回答表达含糊且多次重复，存在单词错误（walk → work）和语法问题。建议：1) 直接回应（Yes/No）并说明原因；2) 用连接词组织原因（e.g. because, and, also）；3) 给出具体你学到的技能或从同事那里获得的帮助；4) 控制在3–4句以内并避免重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because I can learn many technical skills and apply them in my daily work. I also benefit from experienced colleagues who mentor me and share practical tips.

Sugestão: 回答含糊且充满填充词，表达不清、词汇不准确（degree for to achieve more price?）。建议：1) 去掉填充词，直接陈述计划；2) 明确想取得的资格或目标（如 professional certification or master's degree）；3) 说明实现目标的具体步骤或时间表；4) 保持简短有力，不超过4句。

Exemplo: In the next three years I plan to improve my professional skills and complete a part-time master's degree in accounting. I will take specialist courses in financial reporting and aim to get a professional qualification such as ACCA to advance my career.

× I graduated from university about six years.

✓ I graduated from university about six years ago.

句子缺少时间状语常用的介词“ago”。在表示过去某个时间点距现在多久时应使用“ago”。建议在类似表达中加上“ago”，例如“two years ago”。

× Currently I work full time as a management accountant in a multinational pharmaceutical company.

✓ Currently I work full-time as a management accountant in a multinational pharmaceutical company.

“full time”作为副词短语修饰动词时常写作连字符形式“full-time”或作为两个词也可，但在正式书写中用连字符更规范。此错误属副词/形容词用法细节，按列表应归入时态/形式类，因此建议使用“full-time”。

× I mainly responsible for financial statement analysis and do some.

✓ I am mainly responsible for financial statement analysis and do some other accounting tasks.

原句缺少系动词“am”，导致无谓语结构不完整；“do some”不完整，需说明“do some other accounting tasks”等。按要求只修正列出问题类型，这里为句子结构错误，建议补上“be”动词并补全宾语。

× Well I currently work for a motor international pharmaceutical company named Merck which is a big company and offer good salary for me and besides that it also have the good policy for us to improve.

✓ Well, I currently work for an international pharmaceutical company named Merck, which is a big company and offers a good salary for me; besides that, it also has good policies for us to improve.

句中存在多个问题：应使用冠词“an international...”；“motor”疑为多余或错误词；动词需与主语一致（offers, has）；“policy”应复数或改为“policies”；另外需要逗号和分号分隔从句。主要按介词/用词及主谓一致调整，建议检查冠词、复数与主谓一致。

× Is it a good place to work?

✓ Is it a good place to work?

该句语法正确，无需修改。保持原句。

× Yes, in Mark, I enjoy the different benefit from the environment and colleagues and my manager.

✓ Yes, in Merck, I enjoy the different benefits from the environment, colleagues, and my manager.

应使用复数“benefits”；公司名应为“Merck”而非“Mark”；并用逗号分隔并列名词。此类为形容词/名词形式及数量错误，建议注意名词单复数和专有名拼写。

× And besides that I noticed my company also have a lot of policy and benefit for women is very good.

✓ Besides that, I noticed my company also has a lot of policies and benefits for women, which are very good.

需把“have”改为第三人称单数“has”；“policy and benefit”应使用复数；句尾“is very good”与前文不一致，应改为“which are very good”以指代复数。属于代词/主谓一致与复数使用问题，建议注意主语单复数与动词一致。

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

面试官原问题想询问喜不喜欢当前工作地点，常用“Do you like...”而非“Would you like...”（后者通常表示愿不愿意做某事或想要某物）。此处属于句子结构/用词选择问题，建议使用更自然的现在时表达。

× Yes, I enjoy this walk. From the walk I can study a lot of technical skills and apply it in my practice.

✓ Yes, I enjoy this work. From the work I can learn a lot of technical skills and apply them in my practice.

“walk”应为“work”；“study”在此语境更自然用“learn”；“apply it”中的代词应与“skills”(复数)一致，用“apply them”。这是形容词/代词和代词指代不一致的问题，建议注意词汇选择与代词一致性。

× And besides that, I know a lot of colleagues who has reached the experience and besides that I enjoy the.

✓ Besides that, I know a lot of colleagues who have a lot of experience, and I enjoy working with them.

“who has”应为“who have”以与复数“colleagues”一致；“reached the experience”表达不自然，改为“have a lot of experience”；句尾不完整“enjoy the”需补全为“enjoy working with them”。属于代词/主谓一致和句子不完整问题，建议注意主谓一致及完整句子表达。

× Umm, in the next three years, I plan to, uh, study my professional skills and, uh, to get the degree for, uh, to achieve more, uh, price.

✓ In the next three years, I plan to study my professional skills and get a degree to achieve more recognition.

冗余的填充词需删去；“to get the degree for, uh, to achieve more, uh, price”表达混乱，应为“get a degree to achieve more recognition”或“to advance my career”。这里归入未来时表达的修正，建议简洁表达计划并使用“plan to + 动词原形”。

× I think it's very hard, but I think I can do it.

✓ I think it's very hard, but I believe I can do it.

句子语法正确，但重复“I think”显得冗余，改用“believe”更自然。此为时态/用词优化建议，鼓励避免重复并用更坚定的词汇。