Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (I am not working at the moment) and give brief, relevant details (recent graduation, institution, and future goal). Avoid long, unclear phrases and incorrect facts (e.g. location confusion). Use linking words if you add information. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I am not working at the moment. I recently graduated with a degree in Computer Science and Engineering from Kalinga Institute of Industrial Technology in India, and I am planning to look for a software engineering role.

Sugestão: Answer directly then add concise details. Use correct article usage (“an entry-level position”) and correct tense. Use linking words (for example, because or so) to explain motivation or plans. Avoid vague phrases like “do the position.”

Exemplo: I don't work anywhere at the moment, but I'm searching for an entry-level software engineering position. Once I get a job, I plan to start as a junior developer so I can gain practical experience.

Sugestão: Be clear about which place you mean and give specific reasons. Use linking words (because, since, so) and avoid awkward phrasing. Keep sentences short and logical. Provide one or two concrete reasons why it is good for you (interest, career growth, learning opportunities).

Exemplo: Yes, I think it would be a good place to work for me because the role matches my interests in software development and it would offer opportunities to learn new technologies and grow professionally.

Sugestão: Directly answer the question and support with specific reasons. Avoid filler words (uh, obviously) and vague terms (this rule). Explain how the job gives satisfaction—mention tasks or environment. Use linking words (and, so) for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like the place where I work because the tasks match my interests in programming, and a supportive team would help reduce stress and increase my job satisfaction.

Sugestão: Give a clear plan with specific steps and use correct vocabulary (software engineer). State short-term and medium-term goals and mention relevant skills you want to develop. Keep it concise and structured with linking words (for example, then, and).

Exemplo: I plan to start as a software engineer and develop my skills in data structures and algorithms. In the next few years I hope to work on real projects, learn new programming languages, and progress to a mid-level developer role.

× I have recently completed my graduation in computer science and engineering from Kalinga Institute of Industrial Technology which is located in Russia in India.

✓ I have recently completed my graduation in computer science and engineering from the Kalinga Institute of Industrial Technology, which is located in Bhubaneswar, India.

Use of the definite article 'the' before the name of an institution is typical in English; also the original location 'Russia in India' is incorrect and confusing. I corrected the location to a likely city in India for clarity and added a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which is located...' to follow punctuation rules.

× But my future goal is.

✓ But I have future goals.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a complement after 'is'. A complete sentence needs a subject and a predicate; here replacing with 'I have future goals' provides a clear, grammatically complete idea.

× I'm not working right now, but I'm looking for a entry position of software engineering.

✓ I'm not working right now, but I'm looking for an entry-level position in software engineering.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound and the correct adjective 'entry-level'; use the preposition 'in' to indicate the field. This fixes article and preposition usage and matches present continuous tense for current job search.

× When I will get the job, obviously I will do the position.

✓ When I get the job, I will of course perform the duties of the position.

In English, time clauses with 'when' use the present simple (not 'will') to refer to future events. Also 'do the position' is unnatural; use 'perform the duties of the position' or 'work in the position' for clarity.

× Well, I think is it good for me because it aligns with my interest which from where I belong because I always wanted to be a software engineer, that's why I will get.

✓ Well, I think it is good for me because it aligns with my interests and background; I have always wanted to be a software engineer, so this job suits me.

The original sentence has incorrect word order ('I think is it good' should be 'I think it is good'), awkward relative clause ('which from where I belong') and tense inconsistency. I corrected word order, changed 'interest' to plural 'interests' and rephrased to a natural, coherent sentence using present simple for beliefs and present perfect for 'have always wanted.'

× Obviously I would like a place where I will work because this rule aligns with my interest and obviously the job will give me the mental satisfaction which really, uh, relaxed my stress.

✓ Obviously I would like a place where I will work because this role aligns with my interests, and the job will give me mental satisfaction and help relieve my stress.

Use 'role' instead of 'rule'. 'Aligns' should agree with singular subject 'this role'. 'Relaxed my stress' is incorrect; use 'help relieve my stress' or 'reduce my stress'. I also smoothed repetition and improved parallelism. Future tense 'will work' is acceptable for referring to a future workplace.

× Well, I will be softer engineer since my childhood, that's why I have completed my graduation in computer science and engineering where I learned about data structure and algorithm, how the software works.

✓ Well, I have wanted to be a software engineer since my childhood; that's why I completed my degree in computer science and engineering, where I learned about data structures and algorithms and how software works.

'I will be softer engineer since my childhood' is ungrammatical and wrong word choice. Use present perfect 'have wanted' to express a desire from the past continuing to present. 'Graduation' replaced with 'degree' and past simple 'completed' is correct. Plural 'data structures and algorithms' is standard. I rephrased for clarity and correct tense usage.