Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer direct, grammatically correct, and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I work.”), then add one specific detail about your role. Avoid repetition and fill words. Correct word order, articles, and tense: say “I’m a lawyer and currently the director of a construction development company.”

Exemplo: I work. I’m a lawyer and currently the director of a construction development company, where I oversee project planning and legal compliance.

Sugestão: Answer directly with location and company role, reduce hesitation and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas: state city, company type/name if possible, then your role with a brief responsibility. Keep to two to three sentences.

Exemplo: I work in Batumi at a well-known development company. As the director, I manage construction projects and coordinate teams across departments.

Sugestão: Be more specific and varied in vocabulary. Give one or two concrete reasons with linking words (for example, because / moreover). Avoid repeating synonyms too closely. Mention a specific aspect that makes it good, such as supportive colleagues or convenient location.

Exemplo: Yes, it’s a great place to work because the office environment is calm and the colleagues are very supportive. Moreover, the location is convenient for me, which makes the daily commute easy.

Sugestão: Use natural vocabulary (e.g., office instead of cabinet) and smoother grammar. Give one clear reason and a short supporting detail. Use linking words like because and so. Correct phrases: “I decorated it according to my taste” and “there is everything I need for work and relaxation.”

Exemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because it’s comfortable and I decorated my office according to my taste. So I have everything I need to work efficiently and relax during breaks.

Sugestão: State your plans clearly and with confidence. Use correct collocations: “get experience,” “be promoted to a higher position,” “become a successful manager.” Explain briefly how you will achieve this (e.g., training or leading projects). Limit to two sentences.

Exemplo: I plan to gain more experience and then be promoted to a higher management position in this company. To achieve this, I will lead challenging projects and take management training to improve my skills.

× I for I work recently and I am lawyer and now I'm a director of one of the construction development company.

✓ I recently started working; I am a lawyer and now I'm the director of one of the construction development companies.

Pronoun 'I for I' is incorrect and redundant; use 'I recently started working' to indicate recent action. Article and noun errors: 'a lawyer' requires the article 'a'; 'one of the construction development company' should be 'one of the construction development companies' to show membership. Use 'the director' when specifying a particular position. Suggestion: simplify and order ideas: state recent work, profession, and current role clearly.

× Umm, I work in Batumi and uh, there is a famous development company, uh and uh, I work in the company and my role is the director.

✓ I work in Batumi. There is a famous development company there, and I work for that company; my role is director.

Sentence was run-on and vague. Use 'there is' correctly to introduce the company and 'work for' a company is more natural than 'work in the company'. Use 'director' without article when used as a job title after 'my role is'. Break into shorter sentences for clarity.

× Yes, it is a good place to work because environment is perfect and also colleagues are very nice and we have very great team and for me this location and this role is pleasant.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is perfect, the colleagues are very nice, we have a great team, and I find the location and the role pleasant.

Missing definite articles before 'environment' and 'colleagues' and awkward adjective use 'very great' (use 'great' alone). 'For me this location' should be 'I find the location' for natural expression. Combine with commas and conjunctions to improve flow.

× Yes, I like the place where I work because it's a comfortable place and my cabinet also is very nice and it I make it on depends on my taste. So there are everything for my work and for my relax.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work because it's comfortable, and my office is very nice; I decorated it according to my taste. So there is everything I need for work and relaxation.

Use 'office' instead of 'cabinet' in this context. 'it I make it on depends on my taste' is ungrammatical; use 'I decorated it according to my taste' or 'I arranged it to suit my taste'. 'There are everything' is incorrect: use 'there is everything I need' or 'there is everything for my work and relaxation'. Avoid literal translations and keep natural English word order.

× I would like to gain experience and after that I would like to promote it in a uh, highest, highest uh, level in this company.

✓ I would like to gain experience and then be promoted to a higher level in this company.

'Promote it' is incorrect because you cannot promote yourself directly; use passive 'be promoted'. 'In a highest level' should be 'to a higher level' or 'to the highest level' depending on meaning. Keep verbs and prepositions appropriate for passive promotion.

× Umm, I think I will achieve this goal and I will be 1 of the uh, successful manager in this company.

✓ I think I will achieve this goal and become one of the successful managers in this company.

Use 'become' rather than 'be' for a change of state. Use numeral words 'one' spelled out and pluralize 'manager' to 'managers' after 'one of the'. Include the article 'a' is not needed with 'one of the'. Natural phrasing: 'one of the successful managers'.