Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid small errors. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., "I'm a high-school student"), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar ("I study at a high school", "I am 17", "I prepare for the IELTS and a Russian language certificate"). Limit to 3–4 sentences to sound natural and confident.

Exemplo: I'm a high-school student in Uzbekistan. I'm 17 years old, and I also take extra courses outside school because I'm preparing for the IELTS and a Russian language certificate. Because of this, I have a busy study schedule after classes.

Sugestão: Answer directly that you don't work, then give a clear, grammatically correct plan. Use linking words (however, because) and correct article use ("an English teacher"). Keep sentences short and fluent.

Exemplo: I don't work at the moment because I'm a full-time student. However, I hope to find a part-time job as a teacher, and once I get my certificate I plan to become an English teacher.

Sugestão: This answer is unclear and contains unnatural phrases. First, clarify whether you mean the language center is a good place. Use specific, relevant details and correct vocabulary (e.g., "study at a language center"; avoid unintelligible phrases like "city eye room" or "aisle smoke test"). Use linking words (for example, "because"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I don't work there, but I study at a language center, and I think it's a good place to learn because it offers modern facilities and many practice classes. For example, they have computer labs and regular speaking practice sessions that help students improve quickly.

Sugestão: A one-word answer is too brief. Even if you don't work, expand with a short reason. Use 1–2 supporting sentences with linking words ("Yes, because..."). This shows fluency and gives the examiner something to follow up on.

Exemplo: Yes, I would, because the language center offers flexible hours and good training for teachers. I think working there would help me gain experience while I continue my studies.

Sugestão: Make your goals clear and avoid filler words. Start with a topic sentence ("My main plan is to study abroad"), then give specific, coherent details and correct word choice ("I hope to work part-time in the USA as an English teacher or an economist"). Use linking words ("then", "after that") and correct grammar ("I am still passionate about this" instead of "Stills burned inside me"). Limit to 2–3 polished sentences.

Exemplo: My main plan is to study abroad, and afterward I hope to work part-time in the USA. Ideally, I would like a part-time job as an English teacher, though I am also interested in studying economics and working in that field in the future.

× Well currently I'm a student, I study in a high school in Uzbekistan.

✓ Well, currently I am a student; I study at a high school in Uzbekistan.

Use 'at' with 'study' to indicate the institution where someone studies (incorrect preposition). Also add comma/semicolon for clarity and expand contraction to 'I am' is optional but fine; main correction is preposition use.

× I'm 17 years old and out of my school.

✓ I'm 17 years old and I attend school.

The original 'out of my school' is unclear and ungrammatical (sentence structure error). Replace with 'I attend school' to communicate being a student; if the speaker meant they are not in school, use 'I am out of school' but likely they meant they are studying at school.

× I also prepare for IELTS exam and Russian certificate.

✓ I am also preparing for the IELTS exam and a Russian certification.

Use progressive form 'am preparing' for ongoing actions (verb + -ing). Add definite article 'the' before 'IELTS exam' and use 'a' before 'Russian certification' or 'a Russian language certificate' (article errors).

× So I would say I have a lot of studies out of the school.

✓ So I would say I have a lot of studies outside of school.

Use 'outside of school' for the intended meaning (sentence structure/word choice). 'Out of the school' is awkward; 'outside of school' or 'outside school' is idiomatic.

× Well as I have mentioned before I'm a student and I do not work but I would like to.

✓ Well, as I mentioned before, I'm a student and I do not work, but I would like to work.

The sentence is missing the verb 'work' at the end to complete the idea; add 'work' for clarity. Also use past simple 'mentioned' (present perfect acceptable but 'mentioned' is natural here).

× I mean I'm looking forward to find a part time job as a teacher and when I got my certificate I will be a English teacher.

✓ I mean I'm looking forward to finding a part-time job as a teacher, and when I get my certificate I will be an English teacher.

After 'looking forward to' use the -ing form 'finding' (verb in present participle). Use 'get' not 'got' for future reference (tense issue). Use 'part-time' hyphenated and 'an English teacher' (use 'an' before vowel sound; article error).

× As I have mentioned before, I do not work but I study and prepare for else exam in at a language center.

✓ As I mentioned before, I do not work, but I study and prepare for other exams at a language center.

Replace 'else exam' with 'other exams' (word choice). Remove incorrect preposition combination 'in at' and use 'at a language center'. Also prefer past simple 'mentioned'.

× So this language center has a lot of facilities such as city eye room when you can practice aisle smoke test and get your results.

✓ This language center has many facilities such as a computer room where you can practice listening and speaking tests and get your results.

The original contains several incorrect nouns and phrases ('city eye room', 'aisle smoke test')—these are likely mispronunciations. Replace with appropriate terms: 'computer room' or 'study room' and 'listening and speaking tests'. Use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' for formality.

× So yes it is very interesting.

✓ So yes, it is very interesting.

Add comma for clarity; sentence is grammatically correct otherwise. Present tense 'is' is appropriate.

× Well, I plan to study abroad and dream of studying and working abroad.

✓ Well, I plan to study abroad and I dream of studying and working abroad.

Add subject pronoun 'I' before 'dream' to complete the clause (sentence structure). Present tense 'plan' and 'dream' are appropriate.

× Stills burned inside me.

✓ The desire is still burning inside me.

Original is ungrammatical. Use a clear noun 'desire' and present continuous 'is burning' to express ongoing feeling; 'still' placed correctly.

× So I like to say umm.

✓ So I would like to say, umm...

Use 'would like' for politeness and add comma; this is more natural in spoken English.

× I'm looking forward to a part time job in USA as an English teacher or economist.

✓ I'm looking forward to a part-time job in the USA as an English teacher or an economist.

Use 'in the USA' (include definite article 'the' with 'USA'), hyphenate 'part-time', and add 'an' before 'economist'. Also 'looking forward to' usually takes a noun or gerund; 'looking for' might be better: 'I'm looking for a part-time job'.