Hometown— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details. Avoid repetition and use linking words if needed. Specifically: fix subject-verb agreement ("It has"), remove filler words, and combine shorter sentences for fluency.

Exemplo: My hometown is Tabuk, a city in the north of Saudi Arabia. It has a wonderful variety of natural landscapes, and I particularly enjoy the mild weather there, which suits me well.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. Avoid ambiguous or incorrect words ("lovers" is inappropriate; use "family/friends"). Reduce hesitation and use linking words such as "also" or "because" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I like that Tabuk is a quiet city because it feels peaceful. I also appreciate having my family and close friends nearby, and the surrounding natural scenery is especially beautiful, with mountains and green areas.

Sugestão: Provide a concise, grammatically correct answer with a clear topic sentence. Use the present perfect correctly for duration ("I have lived here all my life"), and give a precise time if known. Remove unnecessary commentary about guessing your age.

Exemplo: I have lived in Tabuk all my life — for 24 years.

Sugestão: Structure your answer with a clear main idea then support it with specific reasons. Reduce hesitation and correct grammar ("depends on a person's perspective and goals"). Use linking words ("however", "for example") and give concrete examples of opportunities or limitations for young people.

Exemplo: It depends on a young person's goals. For example, if they prefer a peaceful environment and family support, Tabuk is a good place because it is quiet and community-oriented. However, for career-driven young people seeking many job opportunities or nightlife, bigger cities might be better.

× It's on the north side of Saudi.

✓ It's on the north side of Saudi Arabia.

The sentence omits the full country name; this is not strictly grammar but clarity and completeness. Use 'Saudi Arabia' instead of 'Saudi' to correctly name the country. (ID 3)

× It's have a wonderful diversity in nature.

✓ It has a wonderful diversity in nature.

The subject 'It' requires the third-person singular verb form 'has', not 'have'. Use correct subject-verb agreement: 'It has' rather than 'It's have'. (ID 27)

× The weather is a really nice for me.

✓ The weather is really nice for me.

The article 'a' should not be used before the adjective phrase 'really nice'. Remove 'a' and place the adverb 'really' before the adjective: 'really nice'. (ID 13)

× I I love.

✓ I love it.

The sentence is incomplete and has a repeated pronoun. Add the object 'it' to complete the verb 'love' and remove the duplicate 'I'. (ID 26)

× I have all my lovers around me, uh, and my relatives.

✓ I have all my close friends and relatives around me.

'Lovers' is incorrect or misleading here when the intended meaning is likely 'close friends' or 'people I love'. Replace with 'close friends' and use 'and' to join 'relatives'. (ID 14)

× I also love, uh, the nature here.

✓ I also love the nature here.

Remove the hesitation filler and extra commas to make a clear sentence: 'I also love the nature here.' (ID 26)

× It's, it's like really something, uh, beautiful.

✓ It's really beautiful.

Simplify the repeated 'it's' and filler words. Use a clear structure: 'It's really beautiful.' (ID 26)

× I have lived here for my whole life so it's will be 24 years so I can guess my age now.

✓ I have lived here my whole life, so I am about 24 years old now.

Multiple problems: odd placement of 'for', incorrect 'it's will be', and awkward phrasing. Use 'have lived here my whole life' (present perfect), and express age with 'I am about 24 years old' rather than 'it's will be'. This fixes tense and structure. (ID 6)

× I think it depends on the person, uh, perspective and goals in life.

✓ I think it depends on the person's perspective and goals in life.

Use the possessive form 'person's' to modify 'perspective'. The original uses 'person' and 'perspective' separately which is incorrect. (ID 12)

× If they want a place where it's a quiet and in the future it's gonna be, uh, crowded and full of, uh, opportunities, it's a good place here.

✓ If they want a place that is quiet now and will be crowded and full of opportunities in the future, then it's a good place.

Fix article and structure: remove 'a' before 'quiet', use 'that is' for defining clause, replace informal 'gonna' with 'will be', move 'in the future' to a natural position, and simplify 'it's a good place here' to 'it's a good place'. (ID 17)

× But if they want like to live in, uh, to feel, to live there.

✓ But if they want to live in a busier city or have different experiences, then it might not be suitable.

The original is incomplete and repetitive. Provide a complete conditional clause explaining what kind of people might not prefer the town. Clarify intention: 'want to live in a busier city' or 'have different experiences.' (ID 26)