Puzzles— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific supporting details using correct grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to play with puzzles a lot during my childhood because my parents believed that puzzles help enhance imagination and develop various skills in children.

Sugestão: Make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the types of puzzles you try.

Exemplo: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored after doing the same activity for a long time. At such times, I try different kinds of puzzles, ranging from easy to difficult ones.

Sugestão: Avoid unclear phrases like 'creates a lot of walking'. Be clear and precise in your explanation. Use linking words to compare and contrast your preferences and difficulties.

Exemplo: I enjoy both word and number puzzles, but I find number puzzles more difficult because they require careful calculation and placement of numbers, which can be challenging.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Provide specific benefits of puzzles for old people and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe puzzles are very beneficial for elderly people because they help keep the mind fresh, sharp, and active, which improves cognitive skills throughout their life.

× Yes, yes and my childhood I usually play with puzzles a lot becaused my parents think that that that if a child play with it basels in their early age, it will help them to enhance their imagination, power and various other skills.

✓ Yes, yes, in my childhood I usually played with puzzles a lot because my parents thought that if a child plays with puzzles in their early age, it will help them to enhance their imagination, power and various other skills.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the question is about childhood (past), the verbs should be in past tense ('played', 'thought'). Also, 'play' should be 'plays' to agree with singular subject 'a child' (third person singular). 'Becaused' is incorrect; correct form is 'because'. 'Basels' is a typo and should be 'puzzles'. The phrase 'that that that' is redundant; only one 'that' is needed.

× Nowadays most of the time I prefer to do puzzles whenever I get bored for awhile doing one thing from a long period.

✓ Nowadays, most of the time I prefer to do puzzles whenever I get bored after doing one thing for a long period.

The phrase 'for awhile' should be 'after' to indicate the time when boredom occurs. 'From a long period' is incorrect; it should be 'for a long period'. The sentence uses present tense correctly but needs preposition correction.

× So at that time I usually play with puzzles and try different kind of puzzles, difficult or normal 1.

✓ So at that time I usually play with puzzles and try different kinds of puzzles, difficult or normal ones.

'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' because it refers to multiple types. '1' is unclear and should be replaced with 'ones' to refer to puzzles. This corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× But more of the time whenever I have to do some number puzzles, I feel it's so difficult because it creates a lot of walking, like it is so difficult to know about the particular number which will be settled on one place.

✓ But most of the time whenever I have to do some number puzzles, I feel it's very difficult because it requires a lot of thinking; it is hard to find the particular number which will be placed in one spot.

'More of the time' should be 'most of the time'. 'Creates a lot of walking' is incorrect; likely meant 'thinking'. 'Know about' should be 'find' or 'identify'. 'Settled on one place' should be 'placed in one spot'. Prepositions and word choices are corrected for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I believe that it is very beneficial for every old people to do puzzles becaused with the help of puzzles they come to know about various other things like their mind will get fresh and their mind will get sharp and active during during the whole life.

✓ Yes, I believe that it is very beneficial for every old person to do puzzles because with the help of puzzles they come to know about various other things like their mind will get fresh and sharp and active throughout their whole life.

'Every old people' is incorrect; 'every' requires singular noun 'person'. 'Becaused' is incorrect; correct form is 'because'. 'During during' is repeated and should be 'throughout'. The sentence is corrected for singular/plural agreement and word choice.

× And their cognitive skills will again become four string.

✓ And their cognitive skills will again become very strong.

'Four string' is incorrect; likely meant 'very strong'. This corrects the adjective usage to properly describe cognitive skills.