Puzzles— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use the past tense consistently when talking about childhood experiences, and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your feelings with more precise vocabulary and keep your answer concise.

Exemplo: No, I didn't do puzzles in my childhood because I wasn't very interested in them. I often found them confusing and frustrating.

Sugestão: Focus on answering the question directly and avoid repeating information. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly and correct minor grammar mistakes for better clarity.

Exemplo: As I mentioned, I don't do puzzles because they frustrate me. However, my friends and sisters usually do puzzles when they have free time, even during trips.

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words and repetitions. Use clear comparisons and correct grammar to express your opinion effectively.

Exemplo: I find number puzzles more difficult than word puzzles because guessing words is usually easier. Although I have tried number puzzles a few times, they often frustrate me, so I stopped doing them.

Sugestão: Provide a clear and concise opinion with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I believe whether older people do puzzles depends on their personal preferences. Some enjoy them, while others prefer different activities to spend their time.

× No, I don't do puzzles in my childhood because I don't have that much interest in it.

✓ No, I didn't do puzzles in my childhood because I didn't have that much interest in them.

The sentence refers to a past time ('childhood'), so past tense verbs should be used instead of present tense. Also, 'puzzles' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it'.

× It makes me feel very confusing.

✓ It makes me feel very confused.

The adjective 'confusing' describes something that causes confusion, while 'confused' describes a person's feeling. Since the speaker is describing their feeling, 'confused' is correct.

× I don't do purses because this makes me feel more frustrated and irritated.

✓ I don't do puzzles because this makes me feel more frustrated and irritated.

The word 'purses' is a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'puzzles' to match the context.

× Irritated and and mostly my friends and my and my sisters do puzzles when they got time and time even when they're traveling to a any trip.

✓ Irritated, and mostly my friends and my sisters do puzzles when they have time, even when they're traveling on a trip.

The sentence has repeated words ('and and', 'my and my'), incorrect verb tense ('got' should be 'have'), and incorrect preposition ('to a any trip' should be 'on a trip'). Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× I personally think that number puzzles are more complicated than a word puzzle because you can guess a word word more easily rather than a numbers.

✓ I personally think that number puzzles are more complicated than word puzzles because you can guess a word more easily than numbers.

The comparison should be between plural forms 'number puzzles' and 'word puzzles'. Also, 'a numbers' is incorrect; 'numbers' is plural and does not need an article.

× So even though I don't like it but I tried it's a it quite a a few times but it makes me feel frustrated so I left that.

✓ So even though I don't like it, I tried it quite a few times, but it makes me feel frustrated, so I stopped doing it.

The sentence has redundant words and unclear pronoun references. 'I tried it's a it' is incorrect; it should be 'I tried it'. Also, 'left that' is unclear; 'stopped doing it' is clearer.

× I think it's not like old people should do or not.

✓ I think it's not about whether old people should do it or not.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'about whether' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× It's like they it's actually depend on them whether they like it or not.

✓ It's like it actually depends on them whether they like it or not.

The sentence has redundant pronouns ('they it's') and incorrect verb form ('depend' should be 'depends'). Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× Some like it or some not.

✓ Some like it, and some do not.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb in the second clause. Adding 'do' completes the sentence and improves grammar.

× So is particularly depend on their thinking and mentality.

✓ So it particularly depends on their thinking and mentality.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' and has incorrect verb form 'depend' instead of 'depends'.

× They can do other activities also to just to spend, spend spend their time.

✓ They can also do other activities just to spend their time.

The sentence has redundant words and incorrect word order. 'Also' should come before the verb phrase, and repeated words should be removed for clarity.