Jewelry— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "my mom" and use proper sentence structure. Also, try to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: No, I rarely wear jewelry except for the earrings my mom gave me when I was a child. She thought they made me look more adorable, and I agree that they are a nice choice.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, using complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your choice.

Exemplo: I'm not sure because I rarely wear jewelry, but if I had to choose, I would pick a necklace. I think necklaces can enhance a person's appearance and add a stylish touch.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains unclear phrases like "So and so that" and "It's quite high and I can pick." Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. Also, explain your reasons clearly and use proper grammar.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually buy jewelry because it's quite expensive. I only wear the earrings my mom gave me when I was a child, which help enhance my appearance.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and filler words. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking and use complete sentences. Provide specific reasons why people might keep jewelry for a long time, such as sentimental value or personal significance.

Exemplo: I think people wear certain pieces of jewelry for a long time because they have sentimental value. For example, a gift from a loved one or a family heirloom can hold special meaning and remind them of important memories.

× No I don't I rarely wear jewelry I just wear earrings because my mom my mom give me when I was a kid and she think it is made me feel more adorable and I think it's really a good option.

✓ No, I don't. I rarely wear jewelry. I just wear earrings because my mom gave me them when I was a kid, and she thinks it makes me feel more adorable. I think it's really a good option.

The verbs 'give' and 'think' should be in the past tense 'gave' and present tense 'thinks' respectively to match the subject and time. Also, 'made me feel' should be 'makes me feel' to express a current feeling. Proper punctuation and sentence separation improve clarity.

× No I don't I rarely wear jewelry I just wear earrings because my mom my mom give me when I was a kid and she think it is made me feel more adorable and I think it's really a good option.

✓ No, I don't. I rarely wear jewelry. I just wear earrings because my mom gave me them when I was a kid, and she thinks it makes me feel more adorable. I think it's really a good option.

The verb 'think' should be 'thinks' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× No I don't I rarely wear jewelry I just wear earrings because my mom my mom give me when I was a kid and she think it is made me feel more adorable and I think it's really a good option.

✓ No, I don't. I rarely wear jewelry. I just wear earrings because my mom gave me them when I was a kid, and she thinks it makes me feel more adorable. I think it's really a good option.

The phrase 'my mom give me' should be 'my mom gave me them' to correctly use plural 'earrings' and past tense verb. Also, 'it is made me feel' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes me feel'.

× What I'm not sure about that because I rarely wear jewelry so I don't know what the most I like but if I wanted I I must choose. I will choose the necklace because it help people enhance their appearance and it's also look.

✓ I'm not sure about that because I rarely wear jewelry, so I don't know which one I like the most. But if I had to choose, I would choose a necklace because it helps people enhance their appearance and it also looks nice.

The sentence needed restructuring for clarity. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'necklace'. 'It's also look' is incorrect; it should be 'it also looks nice'. Modal verbs and verb forms were corrected to fit conditional context.

× What I'm not sure about that because I rarely wear jewelry so I don't know what the most I like but if I wanted I I must choose. I will choose the necklace because it help people enhance their appearance and it's also look.

✓ I'm not sure about that because I rarely wear jewelry, so I don't know which one I like the most. But if I had to choose, I would choose a necklace because it helps people enhance their appearance and it also looks nice.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'necklace'. Also, 'it's also look' should be 'it also looks'.

× What I'm not sure about that because I rarely wear jewelry so I don't know what the most I like but if I wanted I I must choose. I will choose the necklace because it help people enhance their appearance and it's also look.

✓ I'm not sure about that because I rarely wear jewelry, so I don't know which one I like the most. But if I had to choose, I would choose a necklace because it helps people enhance their appearance and it also looks nice.

The phrase 'if I wanted I I must choose' is incorrect. It should be 'if I had to choose, I would choose' to correctly express a hypothetical situation using modal verbs.

× No, I don't. I rarely buy and wear jewelry. I just wear earrings that my mom gave me when I was a kid and it helped me enhance my appearance. So and so that I didn't buy any jewelry because it quite high. It's quite high and I can pick.

✓ No, I don't. I rarely buy and wear jewelry. I just wear earrings that my mom gave me when I was a kid, and they help me enhance my appearance. So, I don't buy any jewelry because it's quite expensive. It's quite expensive, and I can pick.

The verb 'helped' should be 'help' to indicate a current effect. 'Didn't buy' should be 'don't buy' to match present tense. 'It quite high' is incorrect; it should be 'it's quite expensive'. Also, 'and I can pick' is unclear and needs clarification or removal.

× No, I don't. I rarely buy and wear jewelry. I just wear earrings that my mom gave me when I was a kid and it helped me enhance my appearance. So and so that I didn't buy any jewelry because it quite high. It's quite high and I can pick.

✓ No, I don't. I rarely buy and wear jewelry. I just wear earrings that my mom gave me when I was a kid, and they help me enhance my appearance. So, I don't buy any jewelry because it's quite expensive. It's quite expensive, and I can pick.

The pronoun 'it' referring to 'earrings' is incorrect because 'earrings' is plural; 'they' should be used instead.

× I think because that piece of jewelry, uh, is, umm, is a valuable, valuable piece of them. So they want to, uh, talk, give, uh, that jewelry, uh, with them for a long time because, uh, they maybe help them, umm, touch the appearance and have.

✓ I think it's because that piece of jewelry is very valuable to them. So they want to keep that jewelry with them for a long time because it may help them feel connected and enhance their appearance.

The phrase 'talk, give, that jewelry with them' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'keep that jewelry with them'. Also, 'maybe help them touch the appearance and have' is unclear; corrected to 'may help them feel connected and enhance their appearance' for clarity and correct preposition use.