Jewelry— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and clear by directly stating what jewelry you wear and why. Avoid filler sounds like 'uh' and 'mmm'. Also, use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I often wear jewelry. For example, I have a red ring on my hand that I've had for a long time. It's not very special, but I like to play with it when I feel anxious because it helps me relax.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to clearly state your preferences and give specific examples. Use correct verb forms and sentence structures to make your answer more natural and understandable.

Exemplo: I don't really like gold or silver jewelry like many people do. I prefer jewelry made of crystals or pearls. For example, a few years ago, I bought a pink crystal necklace from Swarovski.

Sugestão: Your answer contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to answer directly and use correct grammar. Also, avoid filler words and be more specific about your buying habits.

Exemplo: No, I'm not the type of person who spends a lot of money on jewelry. I prefer practical items. Usually, I receive jewelry as gifts from my parents or friends, and I rarely buy it for myself.

Sugestão: Your answer has some good ideas but is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid sentence fragments and use correct verb forms.

Exemplo: I think some people wear jewelry for a long time because it has special meaning to them. For example, I have been wearing a string bracelet for almost three months. I bought it at a shopping mall, and although it wasn't expensive, it helps me relax when I feel anxious.

× this ring was accompanying me for a long time

✓ this ring has been accompanying me for a long time

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past continuous tense 'was accompanying' to describe an action that started in the past and continues to the present. The present perfect continuous tense 'has been accompanying' is appropriate here to express this ongoing action.

× it's actually no something special

✓ it's actually not something special

The phrase 'no something special' is incorrect. The correct negation is 'not something special' to properly negate the noun phrase.

× for me to roll in it because when I feel anxiety, I want to enroll in it's it's make me feel really relaxed

✓ for me to roll it because when I feel anxious, I want to roll it; it makes me feel really relaxed

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'roll in it' and 'enroll in it' are incorrect expressions; the correct phrase is 'roll it'. Also, 'feel anxiety' should be 'feel anxious' to use the adjective form. 'It's it's make me' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it makes me' to agree with the singular subject.

× Actually I doesn't like the gold or the silver that somebody will like it

✓ Actually I don't like gold or silver like some people do

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'doesn't' with the first person singular subject 'I'. The correct auxiliary verb is 'don't'. Also, 'the gold or the silver' is better as 'gold or silver' without articles when speaking generally. The phrase 'that somebody will like it' is awkward and redundant; 'like some people do' is clearer.

× Years ago I was by a necklace for of the pinks crystal from Swarovski

✓ Years ago I bought a necklace made of pink crystals from Swarovski

The phrase 'was by' is incorrect; the correct past tense verb is 'bought'. 'For of the pinks crystal' is ungrammatical; it should be 'made of pink crystals'. Also, 'pinks' should be 'pink' as an adjective.

× No, I doesn't the kind of girl that I would spend a lot of money in juries

✓ No, I'm not the kind of girl who would spend a lot of money on jewelry

'I doesn't' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't' or 'I'm not'. Also, 'in juries' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'on jewelry'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I would spend a lot of money in juries

✓ I would spend a lot of money on jewelry

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when talking about spending money; the correct preposition is 'on'.

× I perform something more practical

✓ I prefer something more practical

The word 'perform' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'prefer' to express liking something more.

× I very little to buy a jewelry for myself

✓ I rarely buy jewelry for myself

The phrase 'I very little to buy a jewelry' is ungrammatical. 'Rarely buy jewelry' correctly expresses infrequency. Also, 'a jewelry' is incorrect because 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'.

× I think some people wear a jury for a long time because they have special meanings

✓ I think some people wear a piece of jewelry for a long time because it has special meaning

'a jury' is a misspelling of 'jewelry'. Also, 'jewelry' is uncountable, so 'a piece of jewelry' is correct. 'Meanings' should be singular 'meaning' because it refers to the special significance of the item.

× I would wear this string for a long time, almost three months

✓ I would wear this string for a long time, almost three months

No correction needed for this sentence regarding singular/plural issues.

× I bought it in the shopping mall

✓ I bought it at the shopping mall

The preposition 'at' is more appropriate than 'in' when referring to a specific location like a shopping mall.

× It's not very expensive, but it's have special function for me

✓ It's not very expensive, but it has a special function for me

'It's have' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it has' for third person singular present tense. Also, 'special function' should be preceded by the article 'a'.