Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear, concise response with correct sentence structure and relevant vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure your examples are specific and well connected.

Exemplo: I really enjoy studying geography because it helps me understand different landscapes, the solar system, and various hill stations around the world.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but somewhat repetitive and unclear. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more specific in your examples. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us learn about the solar system, including the planets, and also understand different landscapes, especially those found in hill stations.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'well'. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I studied geography in school and performed well, often scoring around 90%. My teacher appreciated my strong knowledge of the environment and surroundings.

Sugestão: Your answer expresses your intention but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct conditional forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow with linking words.

Exemplo: If I have the opportunity in the future, I would definitely become a geography teacher because I have strong knowledge in this subject. I would like to share this knowledge with students and even other teachers who may not be as familiar with geography.

Sugestão: Your answer shows willingness but is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas logically, use linking words, and complete your sentences. Be specific about how learning about other countries' geography will benefit you.

Exemplo: Definitely, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries. In the future, I plan to travel to many places, which will help me understand different geographical features better than I do now.

× I would like to learn that you graffi in several ways, such As for landscapes.

✓ I would like to learn geography in several ways, such as about landscapes.

The original sentence contains unclear wording and incorrect verb usage ('learn that you graffi'). The phrase 'such As' should be 'such as' and 'graffi' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'geography'. The verb 'learn' should be followed by the object 'geography' and the preposition 'about' to indicate the topic. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Planets solar system and also bought the hill stations.

✓ the planets in the solar system and also about the hill stations.

The original phrase lacks necessary prepositions and articles. 'Planets solar system' should be 'the planets in the solar system' to correctly indicate location. 'Bought the hill stations' is incorrect; likely intended 'about the hill stations'. Proper prepositions and articles are essential for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× it's useful in several ways, such as to know about the solar system in which we can study about the planets, rather than that we can learn more about the landscapes, mostly which are in which are on the hill stations.

✓ it's useful in several ways, such as knowing about the solar system where we can study the planets; besides that, we can learn more about landscapes, mostly those on hill stations.

The phrase 'such as to know about' is better expressed as 'such as knowing about' to use the gerund form after 'such as'. The phrase 'study about the planets' should be 'study the planets' as 'study' does not require 'about'. 'Rather than that' is incorrect here; 'besides that' or 'in addition' fits better. The phrase 'mostly which are in which are on the hill stations' is redundant and unclear; simplified to 'mostly those on hill stations' for clarity.

× Yes, I have learned the geography during my school time.

✓ Yes, I learned geography during my school time.

The present perfect tense 'have learned' is less appropriate with a specific past time reference 'during my school time'. The simple past 'learned' is correct here. Also, 'the geography' is incorrect; 'geography' as a subject does not need 'the'.

× I was very good in geography and I always scored like 90% in them.

✓ I was very good at geography and I always scored around 90%.

'Good in' should be 'good at' when referring to subjects. 'Scored like 90%' is informal; 'scored around 90%' is more appropriate. 'In them' is unnecessary and incorrect because 'geography' is singular and uncountable here.

× my teacher always appreciated me because I had a great knowledge about the surroundings.

✓ my teacher always appreciated me because I had great knowledge of the surroundings.

'Knowledge' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. The correct preposition is 'of' rather than 'about' when referring to knowledge of something.

× Well, if I would have a chance in future to become a geography teacher, I would definitely go for that because I had a good strong knowledge about that.

✓ Well, if I have a chance in the future to become a geography teacher, I would definitely go for that because I have strong knowledge about it.

The conditional 'if I would have' is incorrect; it should be 'if I have'. 'In future' should be 'in the future'. 'Had' should be 'have' to match the present condition. 'Good strong knowledge about that' is awkward; 'strong knowledge about it' is better.

× And I will also want to separate that knowledge among the students as well as the other tutors, because some people, some tutors doesn't have much knowledge about the geograph it's good for.

✓ And I also want to share that knowledge with the students as well as other tutors, because some people, some tutors don't have much knowledge about geography, which is important.

'Separate that knowledge among' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'share that knowledge with'. 'Doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural 'tutors'. 'Geograph it's good for' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'geography, which is important'.

× Definitely yes, I would like to learn more about the geography of other nations for example, as in future I would like to explore more and more countries which will help me to learn about the geographical things more as compared to the current.

✓ Definitely yes, I would like to learn more about the geography of other nations. For example, in the future I would like to explore more countries, which will help me learn more about geographical aspects compared to now.

The sentence is long and awkward; splitting improves clarity. 'As in future' should be 'in the future'. 'Geographical things' is vague; 'geographical aspects' is better. 'As compared to the current' is incomplete; 'compared to now' is clearer.

× Because currently I am working now and to be explored the other countries I need.

✓ Currently, I am working, and to explore other countries, I need to plan accordingly.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'To be explored the other countries I need' is incorrect structure. A clearer sentence is provided to express the intended meaning: that the speaker is working now and needs to plan to explore other countries.