Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は少し冗長で、文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で効果的な表現にするために、主題文を明確にし、理由を簡潔に述べることが重要です。例えば、"I have liked geography since I was 10 because it helps me understand history better."のようにすると良いでしょう。

Exemplo: I have liked geography since I was 10 because it helps me understand history better.

Sugestão: 回答が不自然で意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。主題文を明確にし、具体的な理由を簡潔に述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げることが必要です。例えば、"Yes, geography is useful because it helps us understand the relationship between history and physical features like mountains, which can improve our daily lives."のように表現しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, geography is useful because it helps us understand the relationship between history and physical features like mountains, which can improve our daily lives.

Sugestão: 回答は内容が明確ですが、文法の誤りと繰り返しが見られます。より自然な表現にするために、文を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げましょう。例えば、"Yes, all students in Japan study geography in junior high and high school because it is an important subject."のようにすると良いです。

Exemplo: Yes, all students in Japan study geography in junior high and high school because it is an important subject.

Sugestão: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文が不完全で冗長な部分があります。主題文を明確にし、理由を簡潔に述べ、文を完結させることが大切です。例えば、"No, I don't want to be a geography teacher, but I am interested in geography and always study it when I travel abroad."のように表現しましょう。

Exemplo: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher, but I am interested in geography and always study it when I travel abroad.

Sugestão: 回答は内容が具体的ですが、文法の誤りと不完全な文があります。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、文を完結させ、接続詞を使って理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、"Yes, I want to learn more about Poland's geography because my grandfather, who is a professor specializing in it, told me about it when I was a child."のようにすると良いです。

Exemplo: Yes, I want to learn more about Poland's geography because my grandfather, who is a professor specializing in it, told me about it when I was a child.

× Actually, I am fond of studying geography because when I was 10 years old I began studying about this subject and it is possible for me because I can learn about history.

✓ Actually, I am fond of studying geography because when I was 10 years old I began studying this subject and it is possible for me because I can learn about history.

The phrase 'studying about this subject' is incorrect because the verb 'study' is not typically followed by the preposition 'about'. Instead, 'study' is directly followed by the object. Therefore, 'studying this subject' is correct.

× Yes indeed it is body of a subject for us to study geography because we can learn about history related to geography and mountains, so it makes our lives more comfortable.

✓ Yes indeed it is a body of subjects for us to study geography because we can learn about history related to geography and mountains, so it makes our lives more comfortable.

The phrase 'body of a subject' is incorrect because 'body of subjects' is the correct expression when referring to a collection or group of subjects. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'body'.

× Yes, in Japanese education, all student must learn about geography when they are high school student and junior high school student.

✓ Yes, in Japanese education, all students must learn about geography when they are high school students and junior high school students.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'all'. Also, 'high school student' and 'junior high school student' should be plural to match the plural subject.

× Yes, in Japanese education, all student must learn about geography when they are high school student and junior high school student.

✓ Yes, in Japanese education, all students must learn geography when they are high school students and junior high school students.

The verb 'learn' is usually used without the preposition 'about' when referring to subjects. Therefore, 'learn geography' is correct rather than 'learn about geography'.

× Yes, I'm keen to study geography about Poland because my grandfather is a professor for geography about Poland. So when I was a kid she told me about.

✓ Yes, I'm keen to study geography about Poland because my grandfather is a professor of geography about Poland. So when I was a kid he told me about it.

The pronoun 'she' is incorrect when referring to 'my grandfather', which is male; it should be 'he'. Also, 'professor for geography' should be 'professor of geography'. The sentence 'she told me about' is incomplete and needs an object, so 'about it' is added.