Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như cách dùng thì và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và liên kết mạch lạc. Hãy tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

Exemplo: Honestly, I don't enjoy geography much because it is a compulsory subject in my school. If it were optional, I would probably skip it. Although it helps me understand the world better, I don't think it will be useful for my future career.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi từ vựng như 'navigation' (nên dùng 'navigate') và 'cleaner picture delay' (không rõ nghĩa).

Exemplo: I don't think geography will be very useful in the future because technology allows us to navigate places easily. For example, we can use online maps to see detailed images of any location without visiting it in person.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi từ vựng không phù hợp như 'UV' hay 'computer research'.

Exemplo: Yes, I have studied geography since secondary school. Currently, I am preparing for my national exam and I plan to do well in geography to pass with good grades.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp và câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng đơn giản và giải thích lý do rõ ràng, tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác.

Exemplo: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find the subject boring. For example, studying topics like population density or climate changes does not interest me, so I lack motivation to teach it.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng, tránh lỗi chính tả như 'patronism' (nên là 'patriotism') và câu không rõ nghĩa. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết giữa các ý.

Exemplo: Yes, because I am patriotic, I want to learn more about my country's geography. However, I am not sure if I will study other countries' geography due to budget limits. If possible, I would like to travel and learn about different cultures and landscapes.

× But I think if it were a choice or optional subject I will.

✓ But I think if it were a choice or optional subject, I would.

The sentence uses 'will' incorrectly in a hypothetical conditional sentence. In the second conditional, the modal verb 'would' should be used to express hypothetical situations in the present or future.

× Although it's broadens my horizons but I feel it is not useful for my future.

✓ Although it broadens my horizons, I feel it is not useful for my future.

The phrase 'it's broadens' is incorrect because 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' and cannot be followed by a verb in the present tense. The correct form is 'it broadens'. Also, 'although' and 'but' should not be used together; only 'although' is needed.

× nowaday with the aid of technology we can navigation the locations more easily and more convenient.

✓ Nowadays, with the aid of technology, we can navigate locations more easily and more conveniently.

The word 'nowaday' should be 'nowadays'. 'Navigation' is a noun; the verb form 'navigate' is needed here. Also, 'more convenient' should be 'more conveniently' to modify the verb 'navigate'. Commas are added for clarity.

× We can have cleaner picture delay of the land with the by surfing for the Internet without going here this place.

✓ We can have clearer pictures of the land by surfing the Internet without going to this place.

'Cleaner picture delay' is incorrect; it should be 'clearer pictures'. 'With the by surfing for the Internet' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by surfing the Internet'. 'Going here this place' is incorrect; it should be 'going to this place'.

× Well, I'm a student right now, so UV is one of my computer research in my school.

✓ Well, I'm a student right now, so using UV is part of my computer research at school.

The original sentence is unclear and awkward. 'UV is one of my computer research' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× I have studied since a student at secondary school in the on the upcoming national exam, I will use it as a subject to ensure that I will pass with flying colors.

✓ I have studied it since I was a student at secondary school. In the upcoming national exam, I will use it as a subject to ensure that I pass with flying colors.

The phrase 'since a student' needs 'I was' to be correct. 'In the on the upcoming' is redundant; only 'in the upcoming' is needed. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I definitely know because I fight.

✓ I definitely know because I think.

The word 'fight' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'think' to express the intended meaning.

× This nation is quite a Jew when I must.

✓ This nation is quite new to me.

The phrase 'quite a Jew when I must' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning seems to be 'quite new to me'.

× When I am a student, I study about population densities or the climate buttons.

✓ When I was a student, I studied population densities and climate patterns.

'Study about' is incorrect; the verb 'study' does not need 'about'. 'Climate buttons' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'climate patterns'. The tense is corrected to past to match 'when I was a student'.

× Although it's like watching grass grow.

✓ I think it's like watching grass grow.

The sentence starting with 'Although' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be a complete sentence expressing the idea clearly.

× Therefore, I don't have the motivation or the energy to teach this subject.

✓ Therefore, I don't have the motivation or energy to teach this subject.

The sentence is grammatically correct but removing 'the' before 'energy' is more natural in English.

× Of course I'm a patronism, therefore I will study more about the geography, but with other countries I do not sure because I have a tight budget.

✓ Of course, I'm patriotic; therefore, I will study more about geography, but regarding other countries, I am not sure because I have a tight budget.

'Patronism' is incorrect; the correct word is 'patriotic'. 'With other countries I do not sure' is incorrect; it should be 'regarding other countries, I am not sure'.

× But if I have a chance I think I will travel more to know more about the cultures and know have the queen of picture the lay of the land.

✓ But if I have a chance, I think I will travel more to learn about cultures and have a better understanding of the lay of the land.

The phrase 'know have the queen of picture the lay of the land' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'have a better understanding of the lay of the land'. Also, 'know more about the cultures' should be 'learn about cultures'.