Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，存在重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。可以先直接回答喜欢与否，再简要说明原因。

Exemplo: I don't like geography because I found it difficult when I studied it in junior and high school. However, I enjoy some other subjects more.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用连贯的句子表达观点，并用具体例子支持。注意词汇的准确使用，如weather而非whether。

Exemplo: Yes, I think geography is very useful. For example, it helps me understand different cultures and climates when I travel to new places.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议简洁明了地说明学习经历和感受，避免重复和不完整句子。

Exemplo: Yes, I studied geography in junior and senior high school. I found it difficult because I had to spend a lot of time memorizing facts, but I still forgot many of them.

Sugestão: 表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用有误。建议直接表达意愿并给出理由，使用正确的词汇和句式。

Exemplo: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not good at it. Although I think geography is important, I don't have the ability to teach it.

Sugestão: 回答有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用连贯句子表达愿望，并具体说明学习方式和原因。

Exemplo: Yes, if I have the chance, I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries. Sometimes I surf the Internet to find information, which broadens my horizons and gives me confidence when I visit new places.

× I don't like the geography, uh, because I find it's kind of a difficult for me when I just study in junior and high school.

✓ I don't like geography, uh, because I find it's kind of difficult for me when I studied in junior and high school.

这里不需要在 geography 前加定冠词 "the"，因为 geography 是不可数名词，表示学科。

× I find it's kind of a difficult for me when I just study in junior and high school.

✓ I found it kind of difficult for me when I studied in junior and high school.

描述过去的经历时，动词时态应使用过去时。这里 "find" 和 "study" 应改为过去式 "found" 和 "studied"。

× I like the something I like some curriculum about the.

✓ I like some curriculum about it.

句子结构混乱，"the something" 不合适，应去掉 "the" 并简化表达。

× Yeah, I do think geography are very useful.

✓ Yeah, I do think geography is very useful.

geography 是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式 "is"。

× It was just the one I just got to my work.

✓ It was just when I just got to my work.

句子中缺少连接词 "when"，且 "got to my work" 表示过去发生的动作，时态正确。

× It's very important when you're getting in trouble to somewhere you didn't know or understand the geography can make you better understanding culture and whether.

✓ It's very important when you're in trouble somewhere you don't know or understand; geography can help you better understand culture and weather.

"getting in trouble to somewhere" 用法错误，应改为 "in trouble somewhere"。"didn't know" 应改为现在时 "don't know" 以符合上下文。"better understanding" 应改为动词形式 "better understand"。"whether" 应为 "weather"。

× Yeah, I know the geography when I was study at junior and Senior High School and I found this very difficult for me because no matter how how how much time I just burned down it and focus on to remember all the knowledge, but I still forgot or do the.

✓ Yeah, I knew geography when I was studying at junior and Senior High School and I found it very difficult for me because no matter how much time I spent and focused on remembering all the knowledge, I still forgot or couldn't do it.

"know" 应用过去式 "knew"，"was study" 应为进行时 "was studying"。"burned down it" 用法错误，应改为 "spent"。"focus on to remember" 应改为 "focused on remembering"。句尾不完整，补充 "couldn't do it"。

× No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm bad at this.

✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm bad at it.

"bad at this" 应改为 "bad at it"，指代前文提到的学科。

× I think know the geography is very important for every student and for every people.

✓ I think knowing geography is very important for every student and for every person.

"know the geography" 应改为动名词形式 "knowing geography"。"every people" 应改为 "every person"。

× So I don't think I have this quite a ability to do this to teach them.

✓ So I don't think I have quite the ability to do this, to teach them.

"this quite a ability" 结构错误，应改为 "quite the ability"。

× Actually, I sometimes will study this just secretly.

✓ Actually, I sometimes study this secretly.

"sometimes will study" 结构不自然，改为 "sometimes study"。"just secretly" 中 "just" 多余，去掉。

× Yeah, I if I have a chance, I would like to learn more about it actually.

✓ Yeah, if I have a chance, I would like to learn more about it actually.

句中 "I if I have a chance" 多余 "I"，应去掉。

× Well, I sometimes surfing on the Internet, I will.

✓ Well, I sometimes surf on the Internet.

"I sometimes surfing" 应改为动词原形 "I sometimes surf"。"I will" 句尾无意义，应去掉。

× There's some geography knowledge, geographic knowledge about the world.

✓ There's some geographic knowledge about the world.

"geography knowledge" 不常用，应改为 "geographic knowledge"。

× This makes me for my horizons and give me some confidence when I just arrived some somewhere new or.

✓ This broadens my horizons and gives me some confidence when I arrive somewhere new.

"makes me for my horizons" 结构错误，应改为 "broadens my horizons"。"arrived some somewhere new" 语序和用词错误，应改为 "arrive somewhere new"。