Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and provide specific supporting details with proper linking words. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: I like geography because it helps me understand the roots of our history and learn about different locations and areas. For example, during my school years, I studied Indian geography, which gave me insight into my country's diverse regions.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how geography is useful. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: Yes, geography plays a vital role in our lives. For students, learning geography at school helps them remember important information and evaluate data about natural resources, such as oceans and mountains.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Be more specific about what you learned and avoid vague phrases. Also, correct grammar mistakes for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I studied geography in 10th grade when it was a compulsory subject. I learned about international geography, including neighboring countries, and gained information about mountains, oceans, and water sources.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more naturally and use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow.

Exemplo: No, I don't want to become a geography teacher because I lack the necessary skills and interest. Teaching geography requires extensive knowledge, research, and the ability to evaluate and present accurate information.

Sugestão: Your answer partially addresses the question but has grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more precise. Also, correct vocabulary and sentence structure for better clarity.

Exemplo: Currently, I don't have specific plans to study the geography of other countries. However, if I get the opportunity in the future, I would like to learn about neighboring countries like Pakistan, China, and Nepal because they are rich in natural resources.

× I'm fond of geography because it's the hull because it helps us to know about came to know about the roots of our history sometimes and also we can know about the locations and area.

✓ I'm fond of geography because it's helpful as it helps us to know about the roots of our history sometimes and also we can know about the locations and area.

The phrase 'came to know about' is incorrect here; 'came' is the past tense and does not fit the sentence structure. Instead, 'helps us to know' is sufficient and correct. Also, 'the hull' is likely a typo for 'helpful'. The sentence should use the present tense to describe a general truth.

× And I read more about in my school time about the Indian.

✓ And I read more about it during my school time, especially about India.

The phrase 'read more about in my school time about the Indian' is awkward and incorrect. 'In my school time' should be 'during my school time'. Also, 'about the Indian' is unclear; it should be 'about India' or 'about Indian geography'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey meaning clearly.

× Yes, geography is a play vital role in our lives especially for the student when they read about the geography during their school time, they easily remember and they can evaluate the data and they can know about the resources especially about the oceans mountain.

✓ Yes, geography plays a vital role in our lives, especially for students. When they read about geography during their school time, they easily remember and can evaluate data and learn about resources, especially oceans and mountains.

The phrase 'is a play vital role' is incorrect; it should be 'plays a vital role'. Also, 'the student' should be plural 'students' to generalize. 'The geography' is unnecessary; 'geography' is uncountable here. 'Oceans mountain' should be pluralized and separated as 'oceans and mountains'. Articles and plural forms must be used correctly.

× Yes, I read geography during my 10th class. At that time geography was the compulsory subject and every student had to read about it.

✓ Yes, I studied geography during my 10th class. At that time, geography was a compulsory subject and every student had to study it.

The verb 'read' in past tense is pronounced 'red' but 'studied' is more appropriate here. Also, 'the compulsory subject' should be 'a compulsory subject' because it is one among many subjects. Consistency in verb choice and article use improves clarity.

× And I learn about the international geography and neighborhood countries and they provide the information about mountains, oceans or water source.

✓ And I learned about international geography and neighbouring countries, which provide information about mountains, oceans, and water sources.

The pronoun 'they' is unclear; it should refer to 'neighbouring countries' explicitly. Also, 'learn' should be past tense 'learned' to match the past context. 'Water source' should be plural 'water sources'. Pronouns must clearly refer to their antecedents.

× No, I don't want to be become a geography teacher because I have no capability and I have no too much interest in the subject.

✓ No, I don't want to become a geography teacher because I don't have the capability and I don't have much interest in the subject.

The phrase 'be become' is incorrect; only 'become' is needed. 'I have no capability' is awkward; 'I don't have the capability' is better. 'I have no too much interest' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't have much interest'. Pronouns and negations must be used correctly.

× To become a teacher as geography we need to be more information and need more search about it and evaluate the data and provide accurate.

✓ To become a geography teacher, we need to have more information, do more research about it, evaluate the data, and provide accurate information.

The phrase 'be more information' is incorrect; it should be 'have more information'. 'Need more search' should be 'do more research'. Also, 'provide accurate' is incomplete; it should be 'provide accurate information'. Prepositions and verb forms must be used correctly.

× No, right now I can see that I no exact plan for that.

✓ No, right now I can see that I have no exact plan for that.

The phrase 'I no exact plan' is missing the verb 'have'. The present tense 'have' is needed to express possession. Correct verb usage is essential for clarity.

× But if I get a chance through my study in future, I obviously want to read about the Jacobian neighbor countries like Pakistan, China and Nepal.

✓ But if I get a chance through my studies in the future, I obviously want to learn about the neighbouring countries like Pakistan, China, and Nepal.

The phrase 'through my study in future' should be 'through my studies in the future'. 'Read about' is better replaced with 'learn about' in this context. 'Jacobian neighbor countries' is unclear; likely 'neighbouring countries' is intended. Prepositions and word choice must be accurate.

× They have very rich in the resource.

✓ They are very rich in resources.

The phrase 'very rich in the resource' is incorrect; 'resource' should be plural 'resources' and the verb 'have' should be 'are' to describe a state. Correct subject-verb agreement and pluralization are necessary.