Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure, for example, use 'although' instead of 'however' in this context. Also, correct 'whether' to 'weather' and say 'locate countries on a map'.

Exemplo: Although I'm not very interested in geography, I have studied it since childhood. I find it fascinating because it helps people predict the weather and locate countries on a map, which is very useful.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and informative but contains some grammatical errors. For example, 'which is can increase crops production' should be 'which can increase crop production'. Also, try to use linking words like 'for instance' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, absolutely. Geography helps people understand natural phenomena, such as earthquakes and volcanic eruptions. For instance, it enables farmers to learn about soil types and climate conditions, which can increase crop production.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and grammar correction. Use 'I have studied geography for about 12 years.' Also, 'mathematic' should be 'mathematics' and 'literatures' should be 'literature'. Avoid awkward phrases like 'I really enjoy whenever I can exploring'.

Exemplo: Yes, I have studied geography for about 12 years. I find it easier than mathematics or literature. I also enjoy exploring maps and learning about different cultures, which I find very special.

Sugestão: Your answer has several grammatical errors and awkward phrases. 'I hit being' should be 'I hate being'. Use 'I feel teaching involves' instead of 'I felt teacher involves'. Also, 'geographic teacher' should be 'geography teacher'. Try to make your sentences more natural and coherent.

Exemplo: No, I hate being a geography teacher. Although I enjoy helping children, I feel teaching involves too much responsibility, and I am not a very patient person. Therefore, becoming a geography teacher would be quite challenging for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but needs minor grammatical corrections. Use 'I am always curious' instead of 'I always curious'. Also, 'studying more about geography in other countries' can be simplified to 'studying the geography of other countries'.

Exemplo: Yes, I love studying the geography of other countries because I am always curious about cultures and environments around the world. Moreover, it can open up more opportunities for me to travel and work in international companies in the future.

× Actually, I'm not into geography, however I study.

✓ Actually, I'm not into geography; however, I study it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'however' without proper punctuation. 'However' is a conjunctive adverb and should be preceded by a semicolon or period and followed by a comma to connect two independent clauses correctly.

× Therefore I really appreciate that geography can help people to predict whether and locate countries on map, which is what quite fascinating and useful.

✓ Therefore, I really appreciate that geography can help people to predict weather and locate countries on the map, which is quite fascinating and useful.

The word 'whether' is incorrect; it should be 'weather' when referring to atmospheric conditions. Also, the phrase 'on map' requires the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct as 'on the map'.

× Moreover, it allows farmers to learn about soil types and climate conditions, which is can increase crops production.

✓ Moreover, it allows farmers to learn about soil types and climate conditions, which can increase crop production.

The phrase 'which is can increase' is incorrect; 'is' should be removed. Also, 'crops production' should be 'crop production' because 'crop' is used as a noun adjunct here, and 'production' is uncountable.

× Yes, I have learned geographies about 12 years.

✓ Yes, I have learned geography for about 12 years.

'Geographies' is incorrect as 'geography' is an uncountable noun. Also, the preposition 'for' is needed to indicate duration of time.

× I found geography it easier than mathematic or literatures.

✓ I found geography easier than mathematics or literature.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'mathematic' should be 'mathematics' and 'literatures' should be 'literature' as these are uncountable nouns in this context.

× Also I really enjoy whenever I can exploring on maps or learning about different culture which is very special.

✓ Also, I really enjoy exploring maps or learning about different cultures, which is very special.

The phrase 'enjoy whenever I can exploring' is incorrect; 'enjoy' should be followed directly by the gerund 'exploring'. 'On maps' should be 'maps' without 'on'. 'Culture' should be plural 'cultures' to match 'different'. Commas are added for clarity.

× No, I hit being a geography teacher.

✓ No, I hate being a geography teacher.

The word 'hit' is incorrect; the intended word is 'hate' to express dislike.

× Although I really enjoy helping children around me, I felt teacher involves too much responsibility and I am not a patient person.

✓ Although I really enjoy helping children around me, I feel teaching involves too much responsibility and I am not a patient person.

The verb 'felt' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'feel'. Also, 'teacher' should be 'teaching' to refer to the activity, and 'a patient person' is correct.

× Therefore it's quite challenging for me to become a geographic teacher.

✓ Therefore, it's quite challenging for me to become a geography teacher.

'Geographic' is an adjective relating to geography but 'geography teacher' is the correct noun phrase for a teacher of geography.

× Yes, I love studying more about geography in other countries because I always curious about the culture and environment around the world.

✓ Yes, I love studying more about geography in other countries because I am always curious about the culture and environment around the world.

The verb 'am' is missing before 'always curious' to form the correct present tense 'I am always curious'.