Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I am somewhat interested in geography because it involves studying maps, the Earth's circumference, and continents. However, I don't consider myself very knowledgeable in this subject as I am more inclined towards other fields.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion and support it with specific examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us locate places on maps. For example, if you want to find a country or a city, geography provides the necessary knowledge. Moreover, scientists use geography to create accurate maps.

Sugestão: Answer directly and add more specific details. Use correct tenses and linking words to improve fluency and coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I learned geography in class 5. My teacher taught us about different types of maps, such as world maps and country maps. She also explained how to identify rivers and cities on these maps.

Sugestão: Give a clear and concise answer with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: No, I do not want to be a geography teacher because I am not very interested in the subject. Instead, I prefer to become an English teacher since I enjoy the language. Additionally, I have completed a certification in fitness training and may pursue that career as well.

Sugestão: Provide a clear and structured answer. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and specific.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries because I find maps and locations interesting. Since childhood, I have been curious about different places around the world.

× I know only little bit about it.

✓ I know only a little bit about it.

The phrase 'little bit' needs an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. 'A little bit' is the correct singular quantifier for a small amount.

× In geography we have to study about maps and earth circumference and country's continents.

✓ In geography, we have to study maps, the earth's circumference, and countries' continents.

The verb 'study' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, possessive forms need correction: 'earth circumference' should be 'earth's circumference' and 'country's continents' should be 'countries' continents'.

× So I'm not the student of science.

✓ So I'm not a student of science.

The article 'a' is needed before 'student' as it is a singular countable noun. 'The student' implies a specific student, which is not intended here.

× Yes and geography is very useful if you want to find someone.

✓ Yes, geography is very useful if you want to find something.

The phrase 'find someone' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'find something' as maps help locate places or things, not people. Also, a comma is needed after 'Yes'.

× So sorry if you want want to find something on map like you want to see a country then you can find it on the map.

✓ Sorry, if you want to find something on a map, like a country, then you can find it on the map.

The sentence has repetition ('want want') and lacks proper punctuation. 'On map' needs the article 'a'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× So with the help of geography you scientist make maps and also.

✓ So with the help of geography, scientists make maps as well.

'You scientist' is incorrect; it should be 'scientists' as a general plural noun. The sentence is completed for clarity.

× Yes, when I was in class 5th then my teacher taught me geography.

✓ Yes, when I was in 5th class, my teacher taught me geography.

The phrase 'class 5th' is incorrect; the correct form is '5th class'. The word 'then' is unnecessary and removed for better flow.

× She told me about maps like word map, countries map and she also tell me how to identify river and cities.

✓ She told me about maps like world maps, country maps, and she also told me how to identify rivers and cities.

'Word map' should be 'world map'. 'Countries map' should be 'country maps' for consistency. 'Tell' should be in past tense 'told' to match the previous verb. 'River' should be plural 'rivers'.

× I want to be a English teacher, not a geography teacher.

✓ I want to be an English teacher, not a geography teacher.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'English'.

× Yes, I would like to learn more about other countries geography because it is interesting for me because I have a lot of interest in learning about the maps locations.

✓ Yes, I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries because it is interesting to me as I have a lot of interest in learning about map locations.

'Other countries geography' should be 'the geography of other countries'. 'Interesting for me' is better expressed as 'interesting to me'. 'The maps locations' should be 'map locations' without 'the'.

× So I always when I was child from since then I am interested in job.

✓ I have always been interested in this since I was a child.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It is restructured to express the intended meaning clearly and correctly.