Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ваш ответ не очень естественный и немного запутанный. Постарайтесь строить предложения более грамотно и логично, избегая повторов и лишних слов. Используйте связующие слова для плавности речи.

Exemplo: I like geography because it helps us understand the world better. My grandfather always says that knowing geography is useful for traveling and exploring new places.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие формулировки. Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова для улучшения связности и ясности.

Exemplo: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us navigate new places and understand different cultures. That's why children usually start learning it around age 10.

Sugestão: Ответ нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует строить предложения проще и яснее, избегая лишних слов и улучшая структуру.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learned geography at school. Although I'm not a big fan, I practice it often to improve my knowledge.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные слова и избегать повторов, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным.

Exemplo: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because the salary is low. Instead, I hope to become a billionaire in the future.

Sugestão: Ответ немного неструктурирован и содержит паузы. Постарайтесь говорить более уверенно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

Exemplo: Yes, I will continue learning about the geography of other countries. Nowadays, I focus on understanding new cultures, which helps me develop useful skills and broaden my perspective.

× my grandfather says always a geography would need in for our future because it would go somewhere it would help us to find or to. Travel it will help.

✓ My grandfather always says that geography will be needed in our future because if we go somewhere, it will help us to find our way or to travel.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'a geography' which is uncountable in this context, and the phrase 'would need in for our future' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'geography will be needed in our future'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× if you will go somewhere it will help you to find something or or someone.

✓ If you go somewhere, it will help you to find something or someone.

In conditional sentences of the first type, the 'if' clause should use the present simple tense, not 'will'. Therefore, 'if you will go' is incorrect; it should be 'if you go'.

× That's why we need to learn geography from age 10, which is normal, to starting learning new countries new.

✓ That's why we need to learn geography from age 10, which is normal, to start learning about new countries.

The phrase 'to starting learning' is incorrect; the infinitive form 'to start learning' should be used. Also, 'new countries new' is redundant and unclear, so it is corrected to 'about new countries'.

× I'm not big fan of learning geography, but I have some experience for this topic 'cause I in my school I learned geography and I'm quite often practice in geography to get bigger.

✓ I'm not a big fan of learning geography, but I have some experience with this topic because at my school I learned geography and I quite often practice geography to improve.

The phrase 'not big fan' lacks the article 'a'. 'Experience for this topic' should be 'experience with this topic'. 'I'm quite often practice' is incorrect; it should be 'I quite often practice'. 'To get bigger' is unclear and replaced with 'to improve' for clarity.

× No, I am not a big fan of beer in the future geography teacher 'cause they are salaries so low, that's why I will not be.

✓ No, I am not a big fan of being a geography teacher in the future because the salaries are so low, that's why I will not be one.

The phrase 'big fan of beer in the future geography teacher' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'big fan of being a geography teacher in the future'. 'They are salaries so low' is incorrect; it should be 'the salaries are so low'.

× But in the future I want to become a billionaire, that's why I will not choose as a teacher in the future.

✓ But in the future, I want to become a billionaire, that's why I will not choose to be a teacher.

The phrase 'choose as a teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'choose to be a teacher'. Also, the repetition of 'in the future' is unnecessary.

× Yes I will uh, but nowadays I try to learn new culture, new countries which will open more specific skills in the future and you can change your mind.

✓ Yes, I will. Nowadays, I try to learn about new cultures and new countries, which will open more specific skills in the future and help you change your mind.

The phrase 'learn new culture, new countries' is incorrect; it should be 'learn about new cultures and new countries'. Also, the sentence is missing commas for clarity and the phrase 'you can change your mind' is better expressed as 'help you change your mind'.