Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and slightly unclear. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating phrases like 'in different countries' twice. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I enjoy geography because it helps me learn about various landforms and natural resources around the world, especially in other countries.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'how diverse is the earliest.' Try to use clearer sentences and link your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, geography is very useful because it teaches us about the natural resources in different countries and helps us understand the diversity of the Earth.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to finish your sentences and use proper grammar. Also, try to link your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I studied geography in college, especially in history classes. I was fascinated by the Earth's natural resources and learned about the diversity of different countries.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, try to use more natural phrasing.

Exemplo: No, I want to become a nurse, but I am still fascinated by geography and eager to learn more about the natural resources in various countries.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has some grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating phrases like 'different natural resources' multiple times.

Exemplo: Yes, I plan to learn more about the natural resources in various countries because I enjoy traveling and exploring the unique features of the places I visit.

× Geography resonates in my habits.

✓ Geography resonates with my habits.

The verb 'resonate' is typically followed by the preposition 'with' to indicate what it connects or relates to. Using 'in' is incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'resonates with my habits.'

× It gives me an insight on what natural resources are there in in different countries.

✓ It gives me an insight into what natural resources are there in different countries.

The correct preposition to use with 'insight' is 'into' rather than 'on'. Also, there is a repeated 'in' which is a typographical error. The phrase should be 'insight into'.

× and it shows how diverse is the earliest.

✓ and it shows how diverse the earliest is.

In indirect statements, the subject should come before the verb. The original sentence incorrectly inverts the order as in a question. The correct order is 'how diverse the earliest is.'

× particularly in history subjects wherein I'm fascinated in different natural resources the earth has and it gives me an idea how diverse is the country and.

✓ particularly in history subjects wherein I'm fascinated by the different natural resources the earth has, and it gives me an idea of how diverse the country is.

The sentence is incomplete and has incorrect conjunction use. 'Fascinated in' should be 'fascinated by'. Also, 'how diverse is the country' should be 'how diverse the country is' for correct word order. The sentence needs a comma before 'and' and should end properly.

× I want to know more on different natural resources which is in different countries.

✓ I want to know more about different natural resources which are in different countries.

The correct preposition to use with 'know more' is 'about' not 'on'. Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with the plural 'resources.'

× It's because I am a traveler and I love seeing different natural resources that are available in the places I have been visited.

✓ It's because I am a traveler and I love seeing different natural resources that are available in the places I have visited.

The phrase 'I have been visited' is incorrect because 'visited' is a transitive verb and requires an object. The correct form is 'I have visited' to indicate the places the speaker has personally been to.