Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and correct small grammar issues (e.g., “I’m fond of earth science” not “I am fond of earth science” is fine but keep consistency). Add one brief reason using a linking word to expand (maximum 2–3 supporting clauses).

Exemplo: I’m not very interested in geography; I prefer earth science because I enjoy studying how the planet works, such as earthquakes and rocks.

Sugestão: Good idea but make the response more fluent and grammatically accurate. Remove hesitations like “um” and give a clearer explanation with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “since”), and be more specific about how geography is applied.

Exemplo: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps us understand locations, climate patterns and how people interact with their environment.

Sugestão: Your response answers the question but is disorganized and has hesitations. Start with a concise topic sentence, then give two clear supporting details — when you learned it and how you felt. Avoid comparing vaguely (e.g., “myths”) unless you explain; correct tense/word choice (“felt easier” instead of “felt easy”).

Exemplo: Yes. I first studied geography in high school. At first it was difficult, but after practicing maps and case studies I found it became easier than I expected.

Sugestão: Clear preference but improve grammar and coherence. Use a direct topic sentence, correct prepositions (“interest in this subject”), and give a brief reason with linking words. Replace “a English teacher” with “an English teacher.”

Exemplo: Not really. I’m not interested in geography; I’d prefer to be an English teacher because I’m studying English and most of the materials I use are in English.

Sugestão: Reply more directly and avoid hesitation. Use one conditional sentence and give specific examples of what you would learn (e.g., culture, physical features). Fix grammar (“it gives me a lot of information about countries, such as their culture or physical structures”) and remove repetitions.

Exemplo: Yes, if I have the chance I would learn about other countries’ geography because it would teach me about their landscapes, cities and cultures, which is useful for travel and study.

× Actually, I don't have any interest in geography.

✓ Actually, I don't have any interest in geography.

No change needed. The sentence is grammatical. 'Interest in' is the correct preposition. Keep using 'interest in' for topics you do not like. (Note: included because sentence is fine; if you intended 'any interest in geography' emphasises lack of interest.)

× Instead I am fond of earth science.

✓ Instead, I am fond of earth science.

Add a comma after 'Instead' for natural phrasing. 'Fond of' is the correct verb + preposition combination. Capitalization: 'earth science' can be lowercase unless treated as a course title. Suggestion: Use a comma after sentence adverbs like 'Instead' for clarity.

× Um, even though I don't know about geography, I think it is quite useful because it can be applied to any places.

✓ Um, even though I don't know much about geography, I think it is quite useful because it can be applied to many places.

Use 'know much about' or 'don't know much about' rather than 'don't know about'. 'Any places' is unidiomatic; use 'many places' or 'any place'. 'Many places' better expresses general applicability. Suggestion: Use 'much' with negatives to indicate degree and use 'many' for countable plural nouns.

× Yes, of course, Why not? When I was in high school, I, uh, learned about geography for the first time.

✓ Yes, of course. Why not? When I was in high school, I first learned about geography.

Use sentence punctuation: separate clauses with a period. 'Learned about geography for the first time' is correct but more natural as 'I first learned about geography.' Place adverb 'first' before the verb for smoother English. Suggestion: Put short adverbs like 'first' before main verbs for natural word order.

× Actually, it was quite hard for me, but later I felt easy rather than learning about myths.

✓ Actually, it was quite hard for me, but later I found it easier than learning about myths.

Use 'found it easier' to compare experiences. 'Felt easy' is incorrect because 'easy' describes things, not the person's feeling; 'easier than' correctly compares two activities. Use past tense 'found' to match 'was'. Suggestion: Use 'find it + adjective' for reactions and 'easier than' for comparisons.

× Not really because I don't have any interest in about this subject.

✓ Not really because I don't have any interest in this subject.

Do not use both 'in' and 'about' together; choose one. 'Interest in this subject' is correct. Remove redundant preposition. Suggestion: Use either 'interest in' or 'interest about' (but 'interest in' is standard).

× Instead I want to be a English teacher because I'm studying for the subject and a lot of content is made of English.

✓ Instead, I want to be an English teacher because I'm studying that subject and a lot of the content is in English.

Use 'an' before vowel sounds: 'an English teacher.' 'Studying for the subject' is awkward; use 'studying that subject.' 'Made of English' is incorrect; say 'in English.' Also add a comma after 'Instead.' Suggestion: Use article 'an' before vowel sounds and say 'content is in English' to indicate language.

× Umm, if I have a chance to learn about geography from other countries then I just say yes because it give it gives me a lot of information of the countries whether mentals or structures.

✓ Umm, if I have a chance to learn about the geography of other countries, I would say yes because it gives me a lot of information about the countries, whether cultural or structural.

Conditional sentence needs proper modal: use 'I would say yes' for hypothetical. Fix verb agreement: 'it gives' (not 'it give'). Use 'geography of other countries' or 'the geography of other countries.' 'Information of the countries' should be 'information about the countries.' 'Mentals' is incorrect; likely meant 'mentality' or 'cultural'—use 'cultural.' Suggestion: Use 'would' in conditional statements, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose correct nouns ('about' and 'cultural').

× So it's helpful for for me.

✓ So it's helpful for me.

Remove duplicated 'for'. Repetition is an error, not a grammar type in list, but fix to 'for me.' Suggestion: Proofread to remove repeated words and keep 'for me' at the end of the sentence.