Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'also' and 'and', use linking words like 'moreover' or 'furthermore'. Keep answers concise and natural, limiting to 4-5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they uplift the mood and bring peace to the mind. Moreover, they help calm me down and make excellent gifts. Among various flowers, I particularly like roses for their beauty and fragrance.

Sugestão: Provide clearer and more complete answers. Avoid vague phrases like 'He then answered me. It helped him.' Instead, explain the reason fully and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I know a flower shopkeeper who loves all kinds of flowers and has extensive knowledge about them. When I asked why he runs the shop, he explained that working with flowers brings him joy and satisfaction.

Sugestão: Try to make sentences more concise and use linking words to improve flow. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: I live in a city surrounded by many buildings, so flowers are not very common. Although some rooftops have gardens, overall, there aren't many flowers visible in my area.

Sugestão: Good answer but avoid repetition like 'some some'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and vary vocabulary for better effect.

Exemplo: Generally, I don't take many photos, but if a flower or plant catches my attention because it is beautiful, interesting, or unique, I try to capture it in a photograph.

Sugestão: Complete your sentences fully and avoid abrupt endings. Use specific examples and linking words to clarify your points.

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on various occasions. For instance, they send bouquets to congratulate someone or to show respect and appreciation.

× Also it helps calm down and also a very great gifting material.

✓ Also, it helps calm down and is also a very great gifting material.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before 'also a very great gifting material'. In English, a linking verb is needed to connect the subject to the complement. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× One day I asked him why is he operating a flower shop.

✓ One day I asked him why he is operating a flower shop.

In indirect questions, the word order should be subject + verb, not the question form. So 'why is he' should be changed to 'why he is' to correctly form an indirect question.

× He then answered me.

✓ He then answered me.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× It helped him.

✓ It helped him.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I live in a city and there are too many buildings around, although there are some gardens on every rooftop but I won't say there are too many or too much visible.

✓ I live in a city and there are too many buildings around; although there are some gardens on every rooftop, I won't say there are too many or too much visible.

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant and incorrect. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation. Replacing the comma with a semicolon and removing 'but' improves clarity and correctness.

× I try to capture it in the frame.

✓ I try to capture them in the frame.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'some flower or some plants', which is plural. Therefore, the plural pronoun 'them' should be used instead of 'it' to maintain agreement.

× For example, if someone is congratulating someone, then they send a flower bouquet for congratulations and also some for showing respect to the.

✓ For example, if someone is congratulating someone, then they send a flower bouquet for congratulations and also some for showing respect to others.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'to the', which is incomplete. Adding 'others' completes the phrase and clarifies the meaning.